All Comments on 'A Daughter's Discovery Ch. 01'

I fail to see how. Rather uninspiring story from a writer I usually reading. Bad day?

1 star

DragonRider55

Anon,

This is the first chapter, and intro.... and I like where this is headed!

Geesh!

Cant wait until mom comes home to find her naked daughter on the bed!

cant wait to see your mom find you naked and you both write about the rest of this

Average start to story. Not "super hot" not bland. Better way to describe characters than the usual, 'let me tell you about us'.

Knowing she's horny, and naked gives US expectations but mom doesn't know she saw the video, or that she may be receptive to an advance, do the seduction still has to come from daughter.

Mom may have left the video paused at that spot everyday for months waiting for the kid to take the bait. And just because she SAW it doesn't mean she enjoyed it, or that she'd be willing to participate.

Tread lightly, let mom explain the who's, how's and why's, give daughter time to absorb it, get her feet wet (among other things) before diving into Mommy.

Obviously mother and daughter isn't incest to one reader. The video she watched was a mom and daughter, but one page was too much for the person to follow.

Great story. I look forward to the next one. Maybe a longer chapter would be great.

Nice progression of author's arousal.

Why did't Mom join in?

very nice story. Can't wait to read the others.

Sometimes I wonder about the people like me who leave comments. They give weird advice as to when and why and why not. Really? This is a very nice story with great potential and it made us both (my bf and me) drip with anticipation. I'm one of the lucky ones who has had some... experience. It reminds me of things I have done. My heart swells with pride.

I do read the feedback and appreciate most of what I read. I'm always looking for ways to improve my craft and the comments help. On occasion, like the first anon to post, he goes out of his way to bitch about things and I find his comments funny. To the last anon that posted, the one with some real experience, I'd love to hear more. Please contact me via Literotica.

Looking forward to read the next chapter.

I mean the story is good yes. I give you that. But I'm more into daddy daughter things and the tags dont reflect the story. Father-daughter-incest-taboo....? Why not make sure the tag is right. I got a bit disappointed because I was looking for something else entirely. But reading the story I'm tempted to read the rest.

it could be lots longer, and I see more chapters waiting for me. erotic and hot