All Comments on 'A Day at the Beach'

Really good story content. Loved the whole concept and the build but...grammar & misspellings etc are really distracting. You really should have had someone edit/proofread it before you submitted it. Could have been GREAT! Keep the work coming but get an editor or at least a learned friend to proofread for you before submission. I look forward to more of your work.

I liked this story. The switching perspectives threw me a bit, but after I got into it, that wasn't a problem. I was worried about how you were going to end it, but the ending you came up with was perfect. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Gina

I wouldn't care about the 25 year age difference.With a man that perfect,who cares.Sounds like every younger woman's older man fantasy.

i have a 19yrs gap wd my bf he is 59 and im 40 and it is good