All Comments on 'A Day on the Trail'

The first part of the story was riddled with cliches, but the rape fantasy bit was, shall we say, unusual (usually it is really a rape, when the woman expected something else) and the last part - the voyeur what wasn't - made it very good. The "rape" scene was especially well written - a surprise, because the first sex scene was pretty pedestrian

Just read your four postings. Well written. Good fun. Thanks.

I just finished reading all of your stories and my pussy is dripping wet. Very well written. Can't wait to read more.

Love these stories. Very very hot.