All Comments on 'A Day with His Girlfriend's Brother'

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63lsmith63lsmithabout 7 years ago
5 STARS

A very good and hot story. hope you have more chapters to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
it's a good story but

you need to proofread your work before publishing it. Oddly enough, the clangers and typos are mostly in the first half (usually it's the other way round). but a good story, all in all and one that actually does happen in so-called 'real life.'

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Nice

I love stories about a gay guy seducing his older sister's boyfriend... so hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More Chapters, please!!

This was hot. We definitely need more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Adam is going to find a way to spend more time with Jack. He’s found out he likes being fucked and will soon find out he loves sucking Jacks big cock.

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