All Comments on 'A Different Kind of Family Pt. 02'

A real story, i really appreciate your work !!!!

Wow, great writing! The first was great and he second was just as good. I nearly cried near the end

What can any one of us really say that would adequately express our awe of your story writing abilities! WOW!!!!

I am humbled by your gift. I am a fifty year old man, and I haven't cried since I lost my own sweet wife; I weep proudly in the soft grip of your masterful talent. Bless you.

As if anyone doubted who was the best

This chapter brought tears to my eyes. Incredible story....incredible wirting.

Absolutely INCREDIBLE rendition of a close knit family love. No tawdry smut, no blemished, unconnected lust. Just one of the most heartwarming love stories in this genre I have ever read. Love scenes were wonderfully descriptive without becoming smutty. Loved it, and I want the last chapter ASAP!!

to be teary-eyed over a group-sex story. I never really liked this category, since most are just bump and grind, but this is different. It has passion & emotion, and the characters are well-developed. Kudos, and thanks for sharing your talent!

after i read last part, i can't read this part. i don't want to see (or read) Katie has sex with other man. the last part r too romance

this is a good story...sometimes hard to keep hard when your thinking about people dying...but good nontheless...if anyone hasn't read them because they are like book lengh (and in my opinion good enough to be published if sex books exist...) go and read the john millionaire and a billionaries life by dragon...best storys on this website and I have read close to 300 stories on this website over numerous years. Keep up the good work.

very engaging narrative, believable dialogues, and realistic human emotions displayed through highly developed characters! my wife and i love reading your stories-- makes for some nice role-playing while in bed, afterward. she loves how your amazing writing style draws us into the story and how it seems so realistic. please give us more like this...

Love how fucking hot your stories are. And I love how well written and smooth the story developed. Hoping for some newer stories and series in somewhat the same manner: hot as hell!!!

I can't remember a time when a story on this site consumed me so completely. Both sexually and emotionally. Thank you for sharing your gift. Can't wait to continue this story as well as your others!

Come on the suspense is killing me.

AWESOME STORIES!!

How dare you make me care about characters in erotica?! Seriously though, you should write for a living if you don't already.

what a cliffhanger!!!

you should seriously start publishing

Cumon!

I'm hooked. Please write more!

Fantastic!

omg I wonder if this one isn't your best !

such a turn of event !

I was very much hoping for a chapter 4. *sigh*

I find myself reading this for the story more than the erotic parts lol. This is the 2nd series of yours I’ve read. Great work.

Stop toying with my emotions!!!! Actually keep up the good work

Thank you.

Superb!

Bill S.

Given the pace of the story i did not expect that!

Much better than Chapter 1. Relationships between all the characters were compelling to read about. Well, worth the 5 star rating.