All Comments on 'A Dinner Dance with Our Mothers Ch. 06'

I was wondering when or if you were going to get the mothers involved with their own sons. This was a great addition to the series. My only problem was in how this felt more like a teaser.

It gets better and better....keep up the good work.

we have to get to the holiday yet

The fact that Mark seems to have matured overnight is fabulous!!

It only took us five chapters, all of which SHOULD have been posted in the 'Mature' category, to get here.

The really sad thing, in all of this, is that the author's storytelling ability hasn't shown a whit of improvement, nor has his command of spelling, grammar, or punctuation. (And I am NOT referencing the difference between the British and American methods of spelling particular words, such as 'color' vs 'colour' or 'gray' vs 'grey' or 'organize' vs 'organise'. I'm referring to words like "discreet" - which is "discrete" in BOTH versions of English.)

I find it ironic that you're dunning the author about using discreet instead of 'discrete' - your comment airs your ignorance, and amply demonstrates your own limited vocabulary - 'discrete' means unique, standalone, separate from others, whereas 'discreet' means exactly that; cautious, careful, unobtrusive, on the down low, which is the sense the author is using it in; pick up a copy of the OED, or Merriam-Webster if you don't believe me, but in future, check your facts before making asinine comments - 'before removing the mote in thy neighbor's eye, remove the beam in thine own...'

This story needs to continue bringing mother and son closer along with mothers and sons exchanging love for each other

Please post the next chapters in this story. I have enjoyed the series so far.

You have to finish this series. You just can't leave it like that.

No one could be this cruel and end this story like thisFA77

It can't make up its mind what it wants to be. Just like the four of them can't decide which relationship is more important.

5 stars. Finally incest at last