All Comments on 'A Dish Best Served Cold Ch. 05'

Can't wait for the next installment! Love the intrigue, as well as the sex!

OH DAYUMM WHAT a PLACE TO STOP LOL, love following this story, awesome ty

I am thoroughly enjoying this series - the sex is great, the story line fun. Keep going!!

PLEASE keep it going!

you have got to finish this it is great

this is so repetative.....its like you keep repeating the same chapter for eat new fuck that lee sticks his cock into.? i am on chapter 5 and at this moment i am thinking of chucking the computer outta the fucking window.? how fucking boring is this. its bearly intresting at best. pull your finger from up your arse and finish this drival.? ps my name is dinkyboots.?

God what a bunch of unsexy JUNK! This is the worse I have ever tried to read!

Anon (7/26)---you are entitled to your opinion of my story, just as I am entitled to my opinion of your (misguided) criticism, which i am choosing to ignore, given the overall rating of the series. i didn't set out to write a stroke story. if that's what you're looking for, there are plenty by other writers. good luck.

Dinkyboots--glad to see you hung in and read the next chapter, too. See comment above.

just found this story this morning and just finished this chapter. Planning on reading the next now as I have enjoyed the planning and the tightiening of the screws to Donnie boy. Hope the rest of the story is just a good as I like the plot.

Obviously I am enjoying it. I usually do not comment until after the last story but after reading that you liked more comments I thought I would not wait until I finished. Yes, possibly there are a few things repeated but it all slides along well with the story and I really like it. I read strictly for MY entertainment and I don't care whether Anonymous likes it or not, I do. Please keep writing.

the original premise was sound but you have taken it to such extreme that all credibility has evaporated. There is no resemblance of the story you started in Ch. 01. Not even a trace.

Revenge? on what, by whom?

First couple of chapters were better. Now you have the brother screwing left and right. Clearly, love isn't your strength.

This has been a very entertaining story so far. I read one of your comments at the beginning of one of the chapters about knowing what the readers like. It is a good idea to know that, but you it's also a good idea to write about what you like. Keep up the good work!

mean time (meantime)

Personnel (personnel)

protusive (protrusive)

up'til two thirty (up 'til two-thirty)

Mr Brock' (Brock)

print out (printout)

time keeper (timekeeper)

re-living (reliving)

some time (sometime)

scatter brained (scatterbrained)

If I was (were)

a round (around)

where ever (wherever)

some thing (something)

broad minded (broad-minded)

Hell (hell)

I have to say how mucch I am enjoying this series. The way you weave the erotic scenes into the general story without overdoing the sex is magic. Thank you and I look forward to reading more like this. Regards Frank

I am loving this, great story line; well scripted sex scenes; and a nice touch in building the characters. I have decided to give up my efforts to educate our obnoxious anonymous eejit, as I have come to the realisation that there are some levels of intransigent; inbred ignorance and ill manners which cannot be altered. Best wishes and keep up the good work. Den

Yup, I'm enjoying this narrative immensely. It is funny, erotic, has great character development, and annannymouse of over 5 years ago is an obnoxious troll. IMO another 5 Stars.

Who cares what anonymous has to say. Great story line and plot.