All Comments on 'A Familiar Stranger Ch. 01'

by MeredithEighty8

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
get an editor

The plot is in bad need of work if you're going for mulri chapter

SweetCharlotteSweetCharlotteabout 5 years ago
I Disagree

Enjoyed this story the first time I read it and re-read it again after seeing previous feedback and I still like the story. Good story, interesting characters, and good, hot sex. Chloe was a reluctant participant who probably could have gotten out of her situation if she had really wanted to, but obviously, she liked what Jake was doing to her. The plot did not bother me.

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