All Comments on 'A Fantasy Cums True Ch. 04'

Welcome back

.....since you last wrote for us. Still love the plot and characters.

For those of you who may have read my face page, you'll understand what's been going on. For those who haven't, here's a quick run-down: Got hacked and all my stories, outlines, and galley notes were taken or destroyed. At this point, I'm starting from scratch so it may take a little longer to get new stories to my readers.

Fantastic twist and welcome back. PLEASE keep this story going. There are so many possibilities.

Hi! Nice work but the mom... not step mom at 48 and the daughter at 38 is impossible.. sorry to inform you can't be a mom at 10 years old. Sorry for that.

It's a beautiful story. DON'T be like other wr7ters, give us part of the story and then say f**k u and then drop their stories for years at a time and NEVER finish them.

Of course, that is totally ur choice, but, we can absolutely stop reading these

?..authors...or...whatever.

Just venting my spleen.

Very entertaining reads all four chapters. Thanks for sharing.

Shortly after the beginning of the story Karen's (The daughter) age is listed as 32. Not 38. A 48 year old woman can certainly have a 32 year old child. 16 year olds get pregnant all the time. Pay more attention to the story

Hawt, Hawt, Hawt!

11/10 'Personal Assistants'!!!!!

A very erotic and engaging story. The last line certainly opened new opportunities and possibilities for Dan and what could become his two “sluts.” There should be more to come. Definitely keep writing!

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Dan and two very hot women! I can easily imagine both craving his cock.