All Comments on 'A Fantasy Picaresque Ch. 04'

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ThrallKnightThrallKnightalmost 10 years ago
I've read all four chapters, so keep 'em coming!

...no pun intended, of course. >.> (Okay, *slightly* intended...) This story is hilarious and horrible in all the right ways, and I love the narrator's conversational tone. I dig the fantasy setting. I do hope to see more of the bandits; I have a healthy(?) appreciation for their "jovial sadism." Love spells are a fun trope, too. Looking forward to reading more in this series!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
where's the rest?

I just read all 4 chapters in one sitting and I'm just curious. Are you ever going to finish this story?

hellinahelmethellinahelmetover 7 years ago
DITTO

Same here, when, if ever are you going to finish the story? Are you perhaps writing somewhere else? I liked your story and hope to here from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Please finish this is a bloody good tale

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Please finish

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