All Comments on 'A Ferry Tale'

Wow great story! And you have been on my follow list for some time! I always know i have a rare treat in store when I see a new offering from you.

Cheers

SAGE

Always a good day when I spot and get the chance to read one of yours. Thoroughly enjoyable.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I liked that. We’ll written. 5*

If anything it proves God does have a sense of humor.

Good story, and well written.

Worth every bit of ✨✨✨✨✨

Take care

You would have thought the ferry company would have given the baby a lifetime pass. Lovely story, thank you. 5*

Just hit one of my pet peeves. Before you imply fascism read Mussolini so you know what it is.

I had a bit of trouble reading the last two pages. Something kept blurring my vision.

I’d give this 14 stars, if I could.

Tc

Didn't feel much romance, kept waiting for her to dump him for a woman....

Five stars. I started through the day’s listings and got no further - I hope, but doubt, that there will be another offering as good for this Valentine’s Day

Very pretty little love story. 5⭐

Thanks for sharing.

Nicely done. Thank you

Just a great story all the way around! 4.8*

I really enjoyed reading this, thank you for taking the time to write it.

Wonderful. I love it!

5

First time reading your work, and I'm glad I clicked on this one. Good story, well-paced, with well-developed characters. definitely a 5 star performance; now I'm off to check out some of your other works! Thank you!

Extremely well written. Thanks 5

First rate romance! Love the birthing on the ferry. 5 stars.

A charming story.

I enjoyed the story very much it moved along smoothly just goes to show you never know who you might find when your not looking , even on the ferry

A first time mom doesn’t birth so fast. Takes hours.

I didn’t have the sense of a consistent theme. Her unusual behavior, voracious reading, calling him both names, the lesbian background, her gaming skills and athleticism all seemed to be thrown out there just to create tension and intrigue but it was all without any goal in mind. And he came off like a bumbling loser. Sorry, it just didn’t gel right.

Nicely done! Enough to wonder if they'd stay together....

***** stars!

Your stories are fun to read - wondering where they'd wind up.

Burninglove

I really enjoyed this story!

4. Would have been 5, but you seem to have jumped on the current bandwagon to make a lead character formerly gay or now bisexual.

Nice and enjoyable, as always :-) Thanks for the treat :-)

Yes, fascist was a little off.

Conservatives are not fascists.

Liberals are not fascists

It depends on if you are Liberal or Conservative where you put fascists.

Since it is a political designation best to try to keep it out of Literotica.

The reason that dad did not walk her down the aisle: she was pregnant, she had had a lesbian lover OR both?

Too bad Meredith did not receive some negative karma. Especially after stealing the Bed.

Over all a good story. The romance was a little show not sure if it was his reluctance or hers

A really well-structured romance, with highly believable characters throughout. One thing missing -- though I may have missed it -- was any explanation for Meredith deciding to leave Jeff that way.

Very well imagined and written. Keep them coming...

Thanks for your polite response to my query about the reason for Meredith's departure.

As Fred and Ginger sang, "A fine romance.." and it was. Thank you!