All Comments on 'A Friend in Need... of My Wife!'

for child suppot!! On second thought give her to Jason and let them send the stupid husband a bill for child support.

who invites the fox into the hen house. TK U MLJ LV NV

pile of shit this story is. For those whose scan the comments first, same yourself the time it would take to read this crap and move on to a better story.

ah, who am I kidding?

this story has no heroes, only zeroes.

another person who writes to piss people off, feel sorry for the loser.

Another anonymous twit who comments just to piss people off.

At least that person limited its comments to the story. I also noticed you had nothing positive to say about the story. You have a fucked up definition of twit.

Because he published this story word-for-word on the Kristen Archives in 2003. I hope you are not taking credit for someone else's work.

what sex about getting knocked up and raising some guys bastard child. It's so HOT that your wife is a fucking slut and she missed her period and you like the cuck you are will raise it and love it....till the friend comes back and want his child.....so sex 1 figure it out

and will you be invited to their wedding? I mena, considering you introduced them and you're such good friends and all...maybe he'll even let you fuck his wife. NOT!

this marriage is OVER

I wrote this several years ago under the name andypavo and I put it on Kristen Archives. Quit using that name instead switched to yeswayted69 not long afterwords. I wanted to post here becase of the instant feedback. Flattered that some people recognized this story from elsewhere on the net. Happy reading!

Knew I'd read this before. This to me has always been an Archetype and it is great to finally meet the author. I have only recentl begun to write myself and your work has always struck a chord.

As to the feedback here all I can say is that recently there has been an influx of half brained morons who read smut but have moralize and attempt to articulate their world view on the rest of the world. Usually they are anons and mouth off about fiction as though it's real hoping anyone who sins dies a miserable death. what can I say everyone needs a Soap Box.

Sorry

obviously, if you wanted feedback [good, bad & ugly], you will get your perverted wish. As a restatement - this story sucks, do everyone a favor and don't submit anymore of this dog-shit. This site already has its abundance of fag authors who wank off to slut wives & delusional whores.

...with the negative responses. Ugh!

A WILLING cuckold story should be posted in FETISH category!Or at least, put a note before your story begins to save our eyes from that type of story.EEEEK!

(Paulo from spain)

Take your shit and choke on it your pathetic loser.

So obviously was this written as a fantasy, it beggars belief that people get upset about it. Insecure, much?

I'm sorry every one i was thinking this was a great story i liked it a lot was great. Just needs #2 so u can go on & tell us about her having this mans baby & if they tell him or not.

They must be shocked when they find out the entire genre known as FICTION including science fiction and, believe it or not, fantasy, are just that...FANTASY. I hate to break it to them, but the jury is still out on Santa and the Easter Bunny too.

Be careful what you wish for......It's about to be showtime....

But it would have been better without the several grammar errors.

well as she is now PG do they tell him it's his or what happens next. Lets have a good long part 2 with her having another by him.And lets see if she wants her big cook or her mate after having his next one too. My wife has afew lovers but makes them all use rubbers. The only time was with 2 of her big black guys. they pulled out. But I know she would have loved it in her. so far she dosen't worry but who knows the next time. I told her if she makes one with them she's out the door as I will not raise another guys kid. she just said it was her body not mine. but the house is mine

Are all anonymous brain dead? I've noticed the more negative the comment, the more they seem to think the fiction is simply recounting a real life story.

Grow up guys, this is fiction.

Let her try the monster anally and let's hear the groaning and moanind and cries of pain.

I enjoyed the story! Well written and hot. Very sexy and appeals to the fantasy most of us husbands have, that the wife will find and enjoy a large cock, with our approval.

Please write more and I will be waiting

Thanks

Joe

SICK SICK SICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

continue the story with twins

you should get more action though :)

As a man who shoots blanks, I life reading about infertile men who surrender their pride and let a real man father their children.

and although it is "Fiction" and some people cant reconize this and get all pissed and bothered about it. The story was very good and I think some people need to be able to tell the difference between real and not real, its just a story,come on people for the ones that cant tell the difference

Sharing is good, but being a wimp is not. The husband is a loser wimp coward. The wife doesn't really love him or care about him at all so Fuck her the cunt! But I think he deserves what he gets or in this case doesnt get, what a loser.

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"I had become a true voyeur, enjoying being cuckolded in my own house."

That sounds like a queer. Otherwise, it could have been a good story.

one of the all time best of its genre that ive read anywhere and ive read a ton of them! you really should write a few more chapters my friend!!

He can't write more chapters the fag sttole this masterpiece from kirstin archives google it referenced with that site it's in the cheating/marriage & obviously preg/big cock sections

This story always gets me hard. There's another version of it on another site where the wife's name is "Jennifer" and the friend's name is "Carl," but otherwise the same story. If this is real, this is a lucky couple. I have fantasized and dreamed about this in the past, I'd love to be this guy! This is the best cuckold story I've ever read.

If you think this is a hot thing for you and your wife you also have a obammma sticker on your car, fucksticks.

great erotic story. but, now she is perhaps pregnant with his child. I see third wheel or perhaps divorce. Swinging never pays off as being erotic to bad for a marriage in ruin now.

Do I need to say more?

You my friend and other assholes are all fucked in the head, so that makes you all fucking retarded. Why would any one give praise to this fucking shit any fucking way.

To say I fought and watch many proud fucking Americans die in the biggest fucking war we ever fucking fought. Way bigger than the fucking Nam, but on a scale of fucking brutality Nam was way more fucking brutal and was a very hard fucking ordeal to go through, many of our young men were really fucked up by that fucking war that we had no fucking business going into that fucking place in all fucking honesty it really was a fucking shit pile of a fucking meat grinder.

Those little fucking yellow slant eyed fucking bastards were fucking vicious little fuckers that wouldn't stop fucking coming, even with fucking legs and fucking arms blown the fuck apart and off, they would fucking drag and roll their fucking way to the fucking line to keep on fucking attacking, those little fucking bastards just wouldn't fucking die.

And after 40 fucking years have fucking gone by we have to fucking ask our fucking selves what the fuck did we fucking gain by going into that fucking hell hole of a fucking shit pile. Not a god damn fucking thing, but why oh fucking why did we fucking go into a fucking mess we fucking couldn't fucking win. Its totally fucking stupid to fucking think we were going to fucking win over a fucking vile fucking race of inbred fuckers any way. I just don't get it, your all fucked in the head I say, but who the fuck cares, I don't give a fuck if you guys all fuck each other in the fucking ass and shit on each others dicks. So fucking what.

You fucking little cock sucking faggot, I hope your wife fucking dies and you have to get guys to fuck you in the ass so you can get your rocks off you worthless shit sucker. Your dad should have shot you into the slop pail and did us all a big fucking favor so we wouldn't have to look at this crap you wrote. Or someone should cut your testies so you cant fuck up the gene pool any more than it all ready is.

Well it looks like your fucked but good now, your wife is knocked up by another man. I think Jason should move into your house and continue to screw your wife with his giant cock now that he's got her bred. Have him sleep in the master bedroom seeing that its not you any more. You can move to the guest room while Jason continues to seed your wife with his potent sperm, being that you don't have any.

You will continue to work though and support the many children that Jason and your wife will produce together. You still have some worth in that reguards that you can help support the growing family of your wife and her new lover. Helping watch the children and change their shitty diapers and feeding all of the kids that will be made will be your chores from now on, it will be almost a full time job, from the time you get off work from your paying job till the time all of the kids are sound as sleep.

But as far as you ever getting back into her once tight cunt, forget about that, she has a much larger and stronger cock that can fertilise her eggs at the drop of a hat, which she sounds like she has always wanted. Your fucking days are over you sterile wonder, just days of wacking off and dreaming of pussy are ahead for you. You should be careful what you wished for.

AND let this be a lesson to all of you other fucked up cucks that want this life style.

It's all fantasy you people. Chill out. No one forced you to read this. Dorks..

IF this is truly the former Andypavo, either write a sequel; SAME characters/similar scenario, maybe add another guy to fill time & SEX-C as hell Candace & lets see if it's worthy &OR as a Huge fan of this work & a gre8 writer in my own (w)Right, pls let me do 1 as an inspired fan? Fair!? I could just do it but I'd like Permission & 4The real Authir to return the pen to this; thrilling of all cuckhold story's. I do Not like whimsy guys & that's jus 1 reason Gary&Candace is Awesome But in a sequel I think it'd be hot if it were "slightly" more 'made known' that initially Jason Being THE Alpha Male shoukd have Full access to Candace whereas Gary's requires fervent request & only @certain times. All done not from threat but knowing his role; THATd be hot; all sequels kick up the stakes some w/Out losing what we loved about the 1st one; Godfather 2/Home Alone 2 & The Dark Knight ;-)

Where do these wimp cuck fag writers come from??? They truly are pathetic losers, the stories just stink up this site.....

The wife whore if she will speak to his friend to find out if it okay to have a threesome! Then he just lets his wife and friend fuck all the time and that's ok? Fuck off and grow up....go back to kindergarten and play with the blocks. Of course she will get pregnant stupid....now keep playing with the blocks!!

Lame story...has anyone writing these stories ever heard of the morning after pill!!! Gheez! 2*

are different things. They loved each other, you made that clear. They didn't discuss what they were thinking or planning or doing, except a little bit with the threesome set up. However, the unspoken plan was for her to get pregnant; that was their mutual desire.

Nice work!

Your wife is a whore. You're a damn cuck, and you are going to raise your friend's bastard.

This is a short-ish story that feels like it could be a book series! I loved it! I want to read many more like this! Thank you for sharing your amazing mind!

This is a hot hot story. Just fiction - so just treat it as such.

call a husband who is watching a LIVE porn show on his living room floor a fag.

Yet when leaving (or perhaps while) they're here, they are watching porn on a computer in their mother's basement...

Watching Live porn ... gay

Watching internet porn... not gay.

And you call hubby's who share gay.. unfuckingbelieveable.

What little frat boy gets off on this tripe?

Silly but erotic

Quite imaginative and erotic. Should continue further

I agree with the previous (anon) comment, the story is quite imaginative and erotic.

Love it, hope there's more!

Very good story....should continue the story

I liked it but would it be a better read to hear the story through Jason's thoughts or words he whispered to his friends wife he seduced and owed? I think there would be where we see the story continue after he left having ruined his friends wife for himself. Maybe in the part after that we are getting the story from the once faith knocked up wife .. there are so many possibilities as long as she continues to love her husband who now can't satisfy her.

I enjoyed it very much. 5*****