All Comments on 'A Fruitful Life'

nothing like having a crappy ending....

I realy liked it! nicely written, leave some stuff for your own immagination.

To bad cherry became sick,

C'est la vie

I felt like I was sitting there watching her eat that damn fruit! lol. Great job. :)

Wow! That was so Romantic, especially the ending. I could imagine all of that and I thank you for the emotions you aroused within me, Lust, Contentment, Sadness, Love...

Don't know what it is about this phrase that hooked me. It's just so fucking sensual. What a tasty little story.

Private feedback sent to explain the vote, love.

~Imp

very well told, very romantic, and yes, the ending is crappy but that's also real life sometimes. We don't have to like such endings but they do occur and it is appropriate to cover it ... after all, not all of life is a bowl of Cherries.

I will check out some of your other stories but this one didn't do it for me. I kept waiting for it to get juicier, I mean WHY exactly did they remove their clothing?

And the ending? Sure, life can be crap, but that's not what I'm here to read.