All Comments on 'A Gift From His Father Ch. 22'

I enjoy reading your stories

Hope to see more in the coming months

Your doing a fantastic job at weaving the story and keeping us excited and looking forward to the next chapter. I know you have a life and the holidays are behind us now, I was hoping you have the next ready to be edited, lol. My curiosity is peaked just wondering how he is going to trap his father and having captured the ring of vengeance, will that working into the knowledge of finding and capturing all rings ? Good luck and continued success/ bill

read this already without realizing it keep up the good work with more chapters like this

Great story. More please

have loved reading these chapters, please keep it up till the story convulsion

thanks

It was nice and hot to read a new chapter and i hope we will soon read more of it

I love your characters and story line. Please continue the GREAT work and please don't keep us in suspense. I can't wait to see how everything works out.

I love this story please add more

Reminds me of the Alan story... here:

If you like this one, you'll like this one

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I wish i was april

So, John both recruits and proposes to April, with some big diamonds, ... This was the second nearly perfect chapter regarding grammar and typos, it is a much smoother read, ... now you (or Spirit02) just need to watch for the dropped words, or incompletely upgraded sentences. And in the story now, JD Rockefeller (Rocky) is John's new advisor in the ring instead of his dad, ... is this a step up? Maybe John will get more truthful ring trivia from Rocky, ... And Rocky will definitely be a good investment advisor, ... ;-) TTFN