All Comments on 'A Gift That Keeps On Coming'

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ShadowsucksShadowsucksabout 9 years ago
"around her long, erect nipples"

Dude,

Nipples don't get long and erect, they'd be poking us in the chin if that were the case.

Please don't have her clit get engorged while she sucks it like an erect penis. Please, God, not that!

I really WANT to like these stories, but they're just so damned thoughtlessly written.

Erin

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
About the bondage scene:

The bondage scene, as you describe it, is rape. It isn't erotic or simple non-consent. It is rude, crude, thoughtless and violent. It is rape. Nothing more, nothing less.

This story is pathetic.

redlion75redlion75about 9 years ago

i quit reading when i read they both work together in a shop that they and 1 other person run and it was a suprise when 1 had to go out of town or they dont ride to work together since they also live in the same house.

storytymestorytymeabout 9 years agoAuthor
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