All Comments on 'A Girl and Her Coach'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wonderful

Please continue

BiBabe2014BiBabe2014about 7 years ago
Amazing

This was simply amazing. You have to continue. Please. Its been so long since I have read something this good. I love it. Please please please continue it.

blondsublesblondsublesabout 7 years ago
Love it!

I love secret sex where there's a possibility of getting caught! Instant turn on. Thank you for writing it. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

That was so fucking hot! I hope there are more naughty rendezvous between Coach Taylor and Natalie. So sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Oh yeah

Must continue. So freaking hot.

GymTeacherYouDeserveGymTeacherYouDeserveabout 7 years ago
Good stuff!

More like this please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great

Please continue because it is a great story and you are telling it so well

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Loved it

Please continue this storyline, it's amazing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
i love it!!!

i need more like this *_*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
5 stars

Would love if this story line continues.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Very hot..please continue this story has the making of a VERY good novel

Goldie55Goldie55about 7 years ago

Wow, would love to read more of this..... loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Your words made me so wet. I've been circling my clit this entire time. I'm going to cum soon

viper086956viper086956almost 7 years ago
GREAT STORY FROM AN OBVIOUSLY VERY PROFICIENT WRITER!

I really wish you had continued this story line with several chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Just gotta say....this is hott!! Too

I like what you do.

Bob

BrokenLance13BrokenLance13almost 7 years ago
Awesome!!

Please please PLEASE!!!!!! Let there be more to this story!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A bit more please

It would have been so hot to spy on those other girls to see them in a three way in the locker room or shower.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Super Hot!

Very well written, and super erotic, it had me on the edge and a very wet pussy as well !

AriannaKAriannaKabout 6 years ago
Amazing story

so erotic and sensual

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meabout 6 years ago

Mmm that was so delicious.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Excellent story

Well done. I enjoyed the details of the physical acts, and the semi-public nature of it.

DrBiSensualDrBiSensualalmost 6 years ago
Love it!

gotta love your teacher student lesbian stories. Especially the ones that don’t wait to long to get started.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for the hot story. I'm so horny I need a wet pussy sitting on my face. Yes, I'm tri-sexual, I'll try anything fun.

williams9750williams9750about 5 years ago
OH MY GOD, INCREDIBLE!!!

That was the BEST Older/Younger girl girl story I have ever read!!

Seriously, That was the BEST!!!

macktoshmacktoshalmost 5 years ago
Fantastic!

Super hot, sweet, and realistic, I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WOW!

That was an extremely erotic and super sensual story! Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hella hot!

I really wanted to read Natalie's experience of licking Coach's pussy for her first time. I crave all the detail - the visuals, flavours, feelings and fragrances!

No need to be in such a rush. I was hoping for the next morning's swim and pleasure session. Also, I was intrigued by Coach's surprise that Natalie was attracted to her, and I wanted her to talk about it more.

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Sweet

Could do with being a 3 pager at least with more detail of them getting together and definitely deserves a follow up. 5 stars.

tobytimtobytimover 3 years ago
Wow

Great sexy story needs more far from finished yet

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very well written. Nice buildup and very hot descriptions. Outstanding!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

More please continue this hot ass story

Kiwi4everKiwi4everover 2 years ago

I enjoyed that I have seen girls making love with each other and I enjoy it too, but the way they look at each other is true love. We had a young boy come to our place about 40 years ago and he only ever wanted to play with ours 2 girls and their dolls My wife and I looked at each other and say he will be gay he was and a very nice young man when he got older. To us, it meant that you are born that way and it is not your choice.

Just like the story, but I have known some lesbian couples and one of them did like a cock from time to time

but that is life. Thank you again for the story Great work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Five Stars One Great Fuck Five Stars RW

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very hot. I would love to read more stories like this.

Infantryguy1776Infantryguy1776over 1 year ago

Absolutely an amazing story, very hot.

roveroneroverone9 months ago

Yummy...!and big fan of small breasts...

easy five/fave...

DreadWriter6969DreadWriter69696 months ago

I love the taboo aspect of a coach seducing one of her players. Very risky, but both are of age and quite willing.

SnoopygirlSnoopygirl5 months ago

Mmmm that was yummy taboo lesbian sex and hot t that! Thx for sharing x

velcro_zippervelcro_zipperabout 9 hours ago

This just screams for a chapter 2, 3, 4, etc. Interesting characters that need to explore their desires! Bravo!

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