All Comments on 'A God of Old Ch. 04'

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Star_glider over 7 years ago

5 stars

This is well-written; I hope there's more.

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Thank you for moving the sexy-time to a luxuriously-appointed bedroom.

"A quick peek into her mind showed roiling waves of pleasure, crashing against her rational mind. The onslaught was merciless; soon that rational mind would be a thing of the past."

Tell me more, lol. Never mind, you did, didn't you? I have to say, this is some of the best sex-scene writing I've seen on this site. Keep up the good work!

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