All Comments on 'A Good Deal Gone Bad'

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
HOW TO MINIMIZE THE RESULT

and still stay afloat. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wrong category

This should be in Incest/Taboo. While yes this category is for rape like situations as this has been, anything sexually untoward involving family members even if those family members don't have contact it is Taboo. There you will get positive feedback. BTW I am a 19 year old girl and I got off on this as I get off on most taboo things

Black_and_White_WriterBlack_and_White_Writeralmost 9 years ago
Oh Dear

How can I vote this a zero? Another racist tale. How can the tape of a daughter, even fictional turn anyone on? :(

tazz317tazz317almost 8 years ago
MORE SHIT TO LIVE WITH

this time its self inflicted. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
shocked

Seeing how far you wet, I was shocked that you didm't have father getting off on his daughter's gangrape. Perhaps I missed that part as I tend to skim depravity.

Only in fantasy world of depraved mind would a virgin-yes I know wave the magic black wand and all white females become enraptured with the animalistic urgencyes and jungle rhythms-having been forcefully impaled on numerous tree limbs suddenly beome willing nymphos. All pain disappearing and emotional trauma dissipated.

OOPS!! YES I FORGOT THE black wands had waved their magic.

Tough to accept your premise that they mistook body of eighteen year old for 40ish slut...would not and did not stop them anyway

Then enraged father just accepts the degradation

Stories such as these in trying to further the myth of black males appendages mirror the african continent, and the wanton and eager acceptance of white females to the black malr master, truly only give credence to the fact-vehemently denied of course, that black males actively set out to rape white females to get back at whitey.

History bears out the allure that white females flesh holds on males of other races-black brown red yellow.

Sad that force is the only way 90 per cent of those couplings occur.

Then those females are abused and degraded as if the black males cannot beat white males in any other capacity. Fact is not many white males care about white females who chase after black jocks to prove they are not prejudiced. Do not want that trash back!

Funny, while blacks have are predisposed to taking by force, black females are more and more throwing themselves under better educated and financially secure and responsible white males.

Not to also mention just as well if not better endowed when erect..

As the group of black escorts who met every early morning in the diner were often overheard loudly remarking, with the brothers what you saw hanging is what you got erect...the white boys off had very big surprises for the eager sisters!

I have bedded scores of those sisters...after the first few started spreading the word, I no longer had to charm or seduce...they came searching me out. Barely 5'7'' and 150lbs the dinners, shows, trips, gifts and respect shown made the adoring fans of the big things attached to small packages entourage

Hey billy boy, your mama, sistahs and abandoned wife say hello...oh a3nd does your current booty call seem a little wet and loose lately

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

How can a (loving) father not go to police seconds after receiving this, and turn himself in, if he really cares for his daughter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

it wasnt erotic anywhere(i am a big fan of noncon) nowhere i felt she enjoyed it

its seems like the male writer assumes that all women enjoy being forced during their 1st time

honestly this was painful to read sorry bro

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