All Comments on 'A Great Day at the River'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Well done.

Mate, that was ace. Think I might have to go fishing now too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great Aussie fuck fest

Really liked how you built up the scene by the river and worked those two hot sisters into some very physical sex. Very good writing. I could feel the sweat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Fishing is good. I have seen a lot when fishing but only twice was I involved. The first was when I was returning, I rounded a corner at the bottom of a overhang and I saw a young guy, getting a blow job from a young girl. I was older, in my 30s, so I said hey, what's going on, they froze. she reached for her bikini top, her breasts were small but her nipples were hard. How old are you two, as he tried to pull his board shorts back on, no answer, how old, no answer, he looking down, I think you should come with me to the police. She started to cry, no, he's my brother, our parents will kill us. I looked at him ,is that true, he said yes. I looked at them, my cock was semi hard, o.k, here's what we do, take her top off, he looked at me, do it, but he didn't move but she lifted it off. I moved over and pinched both her nipples, they got hard, he ran off, she said come back. I said don't worry, i'm not going to hurt you, just do to me what you were doing to him. I dropped my shorts, I put her hand on my cock, slowly she began stroking it, then knelt, I pushed my cock into her mouth, moving slowly back and forward, I stopped, she then moved back and forward, that's nice, run your tongue around the head,she did, that's it, my cock was about to shoot, I'm going to cum, try and swallow it, holding her head still as my cum shot into her mouth. She didn't swallow all of it but she sure tried, even running her tongue around my cock after I had cum. I helped her up, I told her that was great, her nipples were still hard, I lowered my mouth to both,her hand went back to my cock stroking it, then i stood up. Lets find your brother. she put her top on, picked up her bag and we walked until we saw him waiting. I said to him, never leave your sister, always look after her and find a more private place. I left them.

The second was about 3 years later. I walked up the beach to fish, I saw an older couple lying on towels up the bank a bit. She had her top off, not unusual at this end of the beach, she was quite big, plump. I fished, a guy walked up to me, small talk, I saw you walk past, any luck, no, he had to be in his 60s, look if you want come over in about 10 minutes, we would like that. I fished, no luck, so I went back, they had moved higher up the beach. There was no one else around, I walked up, he was lying on his back, she was on top of him, his cock in her pussy. Hello, they looked at me, he said good timing, he said lately she has told me she wanted to try 2 cocks, her hormones have been a bit strange, not wanting sex, but today, she said lets see, she is so wet. I looked at her, is that true, yes, I lowered my shorts, she reached over and took my cock guiding me to her mouth, sucking, I heard him say oh yeh, I got hard, she pulled back, leaning forward over him. I started to stroke, he said no, I meant in her, she wants it in her you know, bottom at the same time. He handed me some oil, she is prepared, I looked at her very big arse, he pulled her cheeks apart, a nice pink hole, I tipped the oil on, then straddled her bottom, aiming my cock at her hole, I slid down as I pushed, pushing down on his cock, moved up and again but this time I slid up and forward, I felt pressure and her hole open and I slid slowly in, feeling his cock, I stayed in her as I felt him fucking, she grunted then I began to fuck too, her insides were warm, tight, this was good, I began to swell,i heard him oh fuck and I felt his pulses , I fucked harder, she screamed, her insides quivering as I delivered my cum. I stayed in her as she shook, what a tight fuck, I felt him shrink and I pulled back.Cum dribbled from her arse, I wiped myself and sat down, He asked do you live around here, yeh, not far, give us your number and we will call when we come down here. O.k. They did, twice until one day I was there, I saw them in the distance, this time another guy was between her fat arse.such is life

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
totally insane!

enjoyed every second of this story!! need to continue...

Campus77Campus773 months ago

I never liked fishing, but if the trip ended like that, I'd give it a try. A very sexy story. Two hot teenagers who love sex with whoever shows up and with each other. A man's dream come true.

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It's been a long time since I have posted anything on here but I do love writing. I wasn't in the right headspace for a very long time but it's amazing how a supportive partner can bring out your creative side. I hope to release some new writing very soon.