All Comments on 'A Guy and His...? Ch. 07: Judgement'

more please, besides the few names of characters already mentioned, why do the other jinn/genies have no names?, how old are they? how long was Gen in her bottle? how long was the council trapped ? etc? more details please.....

keep up your great story, awesome fast updates, looking forward to many more chapters....

Are you planning to add more chapters to this series? I've read all 55 chapters on xnxx.com and would love to see the story continue.

Or are you just moving them to literotica?

I am still writing it though I am close to finished with it. Yes I am moving all of them to Literotica. Actually am moving all my sex stories here, Not so sure I could put the others here as they really have no sex at all.

Pars001

Glad to hear that there will be more. Lit has a non-erotic genre, so you can put the other stories there.

😁😁😁

Funny I looked and the only non-erotic that Lit has is non-erotic poetry. I looked for a while didn't see any such animal.

Here's the link:

https://www.literotica.com/c/non-erotic-stories

Hope this helps.

ok found it already got Lost Empire added should come up in a day or so

Awesome 😁😁😁

This chapter was slightly confusing in that the test scenes jumped a few steps in the telling. Instead of going A - B - C - D, the author (who know where he was wanting to take the story) went A - D without the connecting parts. For example, no mention of what the gong noises were for, who the council were or their exile, and the most glaring example was suddenly Jack having Dreama's ownership bottle in his hand with no mention of how he got it or how the council got it.

(Unless it is all explained in the next chapter...)

I think it was a new story bearing a little semblance to what happened before. Perhaps you missed a few chapters when transferring across.

Looks like you rushed this part and forgot what you had already written, not just in previous chapters but in previous lines.

I just started reading this an hour ago and holy fuck do I love it! You seem to be getting a lot of negative comments but I just want to say that this is without a doubt one of best, most creative stories I have read so far. I wish I could do more than give 5 stars, because you certainly deserve it!