All Comments on 'A Guy and His...? Ch. 12: A New Threat'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Chapters are becoming predictable story becoming too drawn out also hero never makes any wishes ie total knowledge of what's going on too many gaps in plot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
please continue

Naysayers are simply buzzing Flys to be dismissed. Please continue, these stories are most enjoyable.

MarkT63MarkT63almost 3 years ago

Getting interesting...

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...