All Comments on 'A Guy and His...? Ch. 13: Another'

Reading this story just makes me mad! I'll just ignore it for a while and maybe it will have a significant amount of chapters (and longer!) when I revisit it!

Imagine a world without periods commas semicolons and the like it would be very hard to read a story wouldn't you say I like your story I don't even care that the chapters are short you churn out your chapters at such a rapid pace that that doesn't matter but please sprinkle in some of these sweet periods and commas I mentioned earlier please pretty please?

See what I did there? ;-)

Late to this party, but revisiting this series again. You really need to sort out the grammar for sentence structure. It would make reading so much simpler.

Wow...