All Comments on 'A Guy and His...? Ch. 26: Bond'

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Thirteenth_StarThirteenth_Staralmost 7 years ago
How about..

Make a new legend... instead of having a four jinn... the ever last master have a five jinn

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good series

Keep plot going.

toddster119toddster119almost 7 years ago
Cliffhangers...

I love the fact that you have cliffhangers at the end of almost every chapter. Keep them coming. You'll have new readers every time out not to mention the readers who already look for your work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Legend question

I got a question about the legend...is it all told already(set in stone...though many can't seem to recall details) or is it changing as jake grows in wishing ability/pain offered and suffered for genies(lovers) gained.... loving the story though

MarkT63MarkT63almost 3 years ago

Did you give a detailed description of the twins? Blonde, Brunette, Ginger???

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...