All Comments on 'A Guy and His...? Ch. 64: Trio Training'

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Anonymousover 6 years ago

Seems to be some missing pieces?

Seems to be jumping around a lot with no actual finished sequences. Like that last part with the doctor? He called her for a reason. Was going to explain after he asked about Truly, but didn't. This happened several times in this chapter.

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Great story!

I appreciate your story. Awesome imagination. Please continue.

Dragonborn1004 about 6 years ago

This story has left me on a cliff hanger for so long and I can't wait for the next chapters

MarkT63 almost 3 years ago

Sorry. Dozed off...

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