by Pars001
Once I followed your characters and then you got distracted. I almost lost the connection and flow. Suggestion: take all the time and finish the story and then publish it within a month or so.
Great stuff again! But Lost Empire is, by far, your best work and your attention is being distracted with other stories! Lost Empire please!
I have given up on reading your stories until I notice that you have posted the final chapter and then read them. This story was kind of lightweight but enjoyable. But the pace of posting new chapters real killed any enjoyment of reading them. It would be great if you just pick one of you long running stories and finish it. But you are the author, so do what you want and thank you for sharing.
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I read from the start, and found it light hearted and fun.. Now, I hate to quit reading but meh......
I know you finished this story a while back. I read it on another site. So the ? Is why is it not on this one? You have been posting chapters of a follow up story to one that's listed here. Why isn't it here also? I love your stories and look forward to reading more from you. The thing I like best about your stories on this site is that I don't have to hunt around for the next chapter. It's all there, in order, nice and simple. Keep up the great work.
A true fan
I have read this story in 1 go, and to find it stopping at chapter 68 and not getting the end of it is frustrating. someone mentioned in a comment that the storu is indeed finished, but not posted on this site, when can i find the rest of it?