All Comments on 'A Halloween Soulmate'

I loved it! more please!!!!!

what a great story I loved every min of it I hope you use these characters again I absolutely love them.

I'm so happy he turned out to be a vampire! I hope you use your characters again!

I loved it. Hope to hear about Jasmine and her vampire love.

Thank you so much for your wonderful vampire story! For once, a good ending. And the sex wasn't bad either:) Can you write another one?

enough time before Halloween to start another story in the series.

You actually have some talent but there are just so many mistakes... typos... and poorly written areas that it takes away from the story. You need to find a good editor it will do wonders to your work.

the previous person. I don't think you need an editor. There wasn't anything that took away from my reading experience and I enjoyed it thoroughly. I'm not sure what that person was talking about poorly written parts, maybe if they weren't posting anonymously, you could ask them. I loved it. Thanks and keep up the good work!

Will there be another story for Jasmine?????? LOVE the name!!!!!!!!! I wonder why TEEHEE :D

you know that you need to make this longer and then go right on and turn it into a full-on book...i loved the things he said to her...beautiful prose... jayha

Loved this! More please. i especially like that the heroine is a black girl named Candace just like me :-P But even if she were not, I would love this story, Please consider writing more about these two and about Jasmine and the brothers!

please please hurry up with the next story and make sure its not a short one lolxx this was a great story keep up the good work.

that was given by the reader who wrote the comment titled 'talent'. Literature is supposed to stretch your imagination, and where I saw perfect segues and break lapses, this reader might have been a bit put off by them because he or she was already picturing this story's cinematic counterpart, where such segues are visually hard to pull off for a work so short. HINT HINT! That said, by all means, your readers implore you to continue.

This so threw me at the end, man! I did not expect this turn, espically with a mixed couple! I Hope that happens to me, but if not, let me have a wet dream about it!

Please tell me you intend to continue. I've read much of your work, just jumping to this one so I'd have something I could finish before I have to leave and I think you've got a great premise here. The good thing about this story is that it does not have to be continued...but I sure as hell wouldn't argue if it was. Of course that could be because I'd still like to see Mark get pummeled.

Amazing! You are very gifted. Please keep it up.

this was so AWESOME

GOOD, THOUGH CREEPY WITH THE SENSE OF REALITY///

Very enjoyable - now, please, let's have them continue - let me know when that happens!

Good story, wish it would have been a little longer, But very good never the less! I am enjoying reading your non-human series. You are good at what you do. Keep up the good work!

This is one of my favorite stories that I can read over and over again.

Spicy + Great writing = Angelicsounds

My only complaint is the length. Excilent story

LOL love the twist .. thanks for a very interesting and entertaining story.

I need more Peter and Candace!!!

I'm looking through the comments and I can't believe people like this shit. Really? That vampire shit came out of nowhere, and it was weird. Very weird. Maybe I'm just not the right person for this type of thing but it was strange and not very well written.

Can Jasmine have her own story, please

#plottwist!! Lol I was just like 'sayWHAT!' Not what I expected!! Lmao good stuff! I love when a story throws me off my game!!

Absolutely loved the plot twist!!! The whole story is just awesome. Plz write more like this one :)

I have read this story when it was first submitted 8yrs ago and loved it then and still love it now.

interracial? good story, just saying

Nice story. love forever, something to strive for.