by YKN4949
Thanks for sharing your story here. Merry Christmas.
How come Jennifer as a "mother" had a cock. If she was her daughters biological father, what happened to the mother?
Heather told about her long-ago divorce - it is not unusual for a woman to be a single parent. But the story behind the other couple might be interesting! What about a prequel of sorts, just to explain?
Full marks again!
This is perhaps your best work, I'm in love with all four of your characters!
Please write more brother/sister stories, they are really good!
Went through all your stories, and can't get enough. The writing and the pacing is ... _hard_ to resist.
Really enjoyed the series. Lots of action and character that were well developed
That sexy transition story, tg/f/f that I was talking about in my DM. :)
I don’t very often make too many comments, but this time I really felt the need to do so, so here we go.
I have to say that your story was not only well written but you have captured 3 of my top subjects in a story. I have always enjoyed lesbian stories and it grew to lesbian incest and in the last couple of years I discovered that I have started to enjoy stories with a transgender person that looks like a girl but with penis (as described in your story), having sex with a woman. I also enjoy a woman with a hermaphordite (yes, I do recall your thoughts on that, but that’s ok).
What I also liked about your story was that you were able to keep my interest in the story, of course because I wanted to know what was going to happen, even though I could guess, I wasn’t certain. So, the suspense keep the story going for me because the characters were charting new areas of their lives, so you couldn’t have easily figure out who was going to be with who.
I like stories like yours but they are far and few, so thank you!
And don’t worry about the grammar or typos, there are so many other writers out there that are far worst than yours, and as for the people who complain about it, they should try writing themselves or they can correct their own copy if it bothers them that much.
You should be proud that you can write and enjoy doing it. Keep up the good work and we look forward to your next story.
This was amazing from beginning to end. I love cute stories and lovey dovey stuff, and seeing everyone just so into each other like this was so good and so so sooooo hot too.
I enjoyed the story, l am looking forward to more similar stories! Keep writing, we do appreciate it.