All Comments on 'A Haram Desire Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Impressive deeply unsatisfied Pakistani wife Tahira takes walk on the dark side similar to another white wife we know in "Happy" on discovers her own personal journey to happiness no matter the cost or as the Muslim say a Forbidden desire for Tahira.

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Cheers!

P.S. potentially wait for Tracking Evil, A Podcast (The Web)

Book 2

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Very good.

harry1965harry19652 months ago

top story, can't wait for part 2

Jaydean409Jaydean4092 months ago

Very hot!!! Looking forward to him leading her into greater and greater depravity!!!

TahrimaBegumTahrimaBegum2 months ago

Absolutely loved it, the push and pull as Tahira wrestled with it all really appealed to me. Can't wait Part 2. Also obsessed with Keenan.

ShaboboShabobo2 months ago

Very good story, enjoyed the build. I was surprised that she had cheated before but it helped with the pace of this story. Good job and looking forward to seeing where things go.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

No pills... Raw and impregnation

auhound49auhound49about 2 months ago
Thanks for this.

Very nice story, and nice about the possible preg risk, as it should be. I hope they both go raw before she gets on the pill so there is some real risk and hot worry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

So excitingly waiting for the next part

mitchawamitchawaabout 2 months ago

A well-written story with an interesting plot. Tahira's dilemma is not uncommon and she is conservative in her infidelity. Her "playing" the internet for partners was a nice touch for a Pakistani in London The first four affairs were short and sweet but satisfied her briefly. The meeting at the grocery store was a nice touch. The lingering follow-up was much better that a "quickie" and their meeting was well-planned, The long sex scene was exciting and in keeping with Kennan's youth. Tahaira's resolve, I believe will not prevail, and I look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

amazing story, cant wait for part 2

skengersskengersabout 2 months ago

Reminds me of TahrimaBegum stories. Can’t wait for part 2

MrBHMrBHabout 2 months ago

Sorry you are quitting the site for a while. Hate to see you going. Will you update this story before you go?

FirsttimewritingFirsttimewritingabout 2 months agoAuthor

@MrBH thanks for the comment. Not quitting the site, just taking a break for a while.

Yes I have a part 2 and part 3 planned for this story and they will be written and uploaded before I take my break.

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