All Comments on 'A Haunted House To Remember Ch. 03'

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ender2k2kender2k2kover 7 years ago
Good story

I hope you write the next chapter soon. thanks.

J_Reader_ComicsJ_Reader_Comicsover 7 years ago
A nice addition

Nicely written, looks like a little danger in store for Mike. Would be interesting to see where this goes with the mother, and his fear of losing someone he cares about.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More please

Good so far. Would like it if you continue the story.

AnyMooseAnyMooseover 6 years ago
Nice series

Glad you decided to write more on the good professor and his comely coeds. Just curious why we didn't see Deb after the haunted house; it seemed like they had made a connection as well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Need more

You can't leave it at that. Great story needs a great ending.

maxsteelemaxsteeleabout 5 years ago
Hoping to getting a proper ending.

It seems like Lucille is starting to understand Mike a bit. Hoping to read a proper ending to this some time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More please!

This story is begging for one big happy family!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This so needs a sequel

So many story lines and opportunities to explore

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
It's been a long time...

...And this fine serial still needs more development....well done, but as the prior commenter said, it DOES need another chapter, or two.

Thanks, I enjoyed it.

maxsteelemaxsteeleover 2 years ago

Hoping that this series get a proper ending as it is an amazing series.

Mr_Hit_ThatMr_Hit_Thatover 2 years ago

Hoping the new year brings a new chapter.

WayPast21WayPast21over 1 year ago

That's the ending?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was a lot of fun but the ending—if you could call it that—was terrible!

I get tired of reading well written stories that have no ending.

It seems as though many authors just loose interest in their stories & just kill it off.

Bill S.

S_FoxS_Foxabout 1 year ago

I’ve given it 5***** to encourage you to take this further.

tsgtcapttsgtcapt2 months ago

Well, ... we shall see ... thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

A penthouse fantasy. Mother, twin daughters and their classmate. Virile libido with stamina, a stud disguised as a college professor. (Without viagra or cialis, or condoms?) What does he really teach?

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