by PaulieCelt
Don't listen to the haters. This is a good realistic story that builds tension slowly and keeps it real.
"Cheating whore!"
Ha ha. These morons sure get riled by a bit of outside of marriage sex.
They don't have enough intelligence to realise it's just fantasy.
But if good ole Billybob had a ten inch cock and was plowing Cindylou causing her 38EE's to jiggle jaggle they'd be lapping it up.
Good story, well written. Carry on.
Good premise.
But rushed.
What was the need to have his cock in her pussy so quickly. Needed more foreply. Extnded foreplay. Needed much more extended playing with his cock before anything further. Needed her inviting him to look at/touch/play with/suck her breasts.
When she told him to masturbate, why didn't she ask him to show her how he masturbated. Did he watch porn? What kind was his favorite?
Four stars.