All Comments on 'A Helping Hand Ch. 04'

...to write this story with you, not to mention hot as hell!

It's a constant delight to see the characters unfold; to keep developing them with you is pure enjoyment. Thank you Many Feathers, my love...may we write many more!

All my Love xxx Your Anna

Don't know why I missed these stories!! MF, have you dropped me from your e-mail list? And then knowing what I do from lurking on Fall Rendevu, the sweetness of your collaboration!!... yes it is really fun to see the characters develop... and the sex was way too sizzling at times... hot stuff.... gonna take a break and tackle the rest on Thanksgiving Day!!

Your collaboration continues to bear succulent fruit in terms of our (or at least my) reading pleasure. This story keeps getting better and better.

This is a wonderful story. It started hot and it just gets hotter.

Trying to read this one but unable to find annavenus69 or chapters 2 & 3

I have to agree great character development. I can't wait to finish he rest.

...that rescues it's own...Is a family I'd like to get to know...Obviously, this is the "Save my sister from a horrendously boring sex life, story"...What she needed all along was to get her ashes royally hauled...and within a loving, trusting environment...Good show...

Love the way the story is written and how the characters are blossoming!

Very well written story.

Clunky prose. Unexciting dialog. Terrible descriptions of the sucking and fucking. The characters are unbelievable and their constant TALKING destroys any eroticism there might have been.

Your prose really is pretty bad:

""Ohhh!" Linda groaned deeply. But I knew it wasn't just the touch of my tongue tickling her nipple, more like the touch of Kay's tongue now flicking her clit!"

So, it isn't ONLY his tongue on her nipple. It's ALSO Kay 'flicking' her clit." Well, that makes sense—sort of. What you wrote is nonsense.

And stop using words from the truck stop, like "quim." Don't let all these glowing comments from your family go to your head.

I was hopeing some one would finishthe birthday night great story. Hpe they get Linda to stay from now on just ned a bigger bed

These two authors are very good together. Everything fits beautifully like a jig saw. Much appreciated.

I often, if I had a girlfriend with a hot roomie, imagined a similar scenario. I am extremely erect.