All Comments on 'A Hero's Welcome Ch. 04 Pt. 01'

Is this Chapter 5 or does it replace the previous Chapter 4?

I posted this as Chapter 5, Literotica in their wisdom chose to publish it as Chapter 4 pt 1, don't ask me why, I've asked them to rectify, we shall see...

Good reading now we just need another chapter. Thanks

I am grateful for the sequel, you are a gifted writer and I love the British setting. You got the Army details right, great story telling and hot sex scenes. 5 star vote

Why did you end this great story as a cliff hanger? This is a story that you could make

50 chapters, if you wanted it to be. I want it to be more and longer PLEASE!!

Yes you are handsome. Your wife better keep a lease on you . Or I could fall, in love with you. I am a man, too!! I was a member of the U.S. Air Force, during the vietnam war. I was blown up. My baby makeing ended that day. I am now 66 and lonely.

Why not take your story about Gerry and Lorna to the next step. Make it a long like to an up to date time. The ever so ofter add another chapter of it. Please !!

ps Let me know what you plan to do. Thank you.

I do have an incomplete next chapter, the trouble is my life and my wife keep getting in the way of finishing it! I've set a deadline for myself for all the unfinished stories (Soldier Doll 3, A Hero's Welcome, Lost & Found part 5, Rag Doll 5, In Love With Lori part 5 and Big Girls Don't Cry 4) for the end of the year; I hope to have the decks cleared by Christmas so I can embark on a pair of writing projects I've been kicking around for ages now, one fantasy/incest, the other just plain dirty, but lots of it...

The Gerry/Lorna arc will continue up to the present day, marriage, babies, a long life together, with Lucy & Charlie popping in and out, so no plans to kill them off or anything, they're such a fun couple to write, especially Lorna, who's based on a real lady, the one who taught me the most about the difference between boys and girls, and left me with a great big echoing void where my groin used to be...

Thank you for the interest, and to the guy who fancies me, I'm very flattered, but very taken, sorry, but here's a hug for you (((HUG)))...

BB1958

In the modern world, most say Asian.

Read your snotty little comment with a grin; in the real world, Asian implies Indian or from South Asia, she's obviously not Indian or South Asian, so Oriental is a pefectly correct and acceptable description, except for the PC trolls like you who scramble around stories looking for a point you can make so people will think you're smart; get a life, read the story properly, for context, you puny little teenage troll, and leave the storytelling to the grown-ups.

I felt the pain Gerry felt when Lorna jumped to conclusions without even giving him a chance to explain. I felt Gerry's pain when he found out he was losing Jenna. This story was both tragic and heartrendering. At the same time it was very erotic.

I absolutely love this entire story line. You have a wonderful gift for story telling. I wasn't sure that I needed to here Lorna and Gerry's back story, but thankfully I was wrong. I can now see the beginnings of their love story that has the potential to be on par with Lucy and Charlie. I hope this story continues. Thank you BB1958.

Do you know you are going to write the second chapter?

I have an incomplete draft, but long-term illness and a doctor (my wife) who won't let me sit and write more than an hour a day have sort of conspired against me to complete many of the stories left half-completed when I was struck down. I'm slowly catching-up, the next part of 'Lost Girl' is with my editor, and a new take on the 'Lost & Found' series, (the same world, but different characters) and a sidebar to 'Shining Girl'. I will be attacking this story before long, I promise, I just have to work in some kind of order, otherwise chaos abounds...

She got off too easy

Not seen this one before, good start though.

A nice addition to the first four chapters. Well done.