All Comments on 'A Hero's Welcome Ch. 05 Pt. 02'

For reasons best known to themselves, Literotica labelled Chapter 5 Part 1 as Chapter 4 part 1; I don't know how that happened, and requests to re-label it have been ignored, so I have Chapter 4, then Chapter 4 Part 1, then Chapter 5 Part 2 - crazy, but all I can think of doing tom rectify the situation is delete part 1 and re-post it with the correct title.

Took me a while to remember this story but once I did. As usual you did an excellent job.

Thanks for the finish. great writing. leave the chapter titles the way they are. it will keep the readers guessing. still great work. hope you are on the mend.

Thank you for your good wishes; being so ill for so long has kind of put me behind the eight-ball when it comes to finishing what I started; I'm so far behind I just met myself coming the other way, but I shall crack-on, and hopefully get Sisterfest 4 out of the door soon, followed closely by A Cure For The Birthday Blues: Baby Blues, and then the next part of Lost & Found, so I have a few up my sleeves, now, if only my fingers were a little longer...

Welcome back again, Sir! Thanks for another great story :D x

This is as many times I read this and again beautifuly written sorry to hear that you have been ill get well soon my friend and I look forward to reading your stories that have me so ingrossed that I cannot put down

Hi. My name is Reza, and I'm Persian (Iranian). I read your story and loved it. Though you mentioned something about my country that isn't true. My people love your country and western styles of life. we don't want to be the barbarian nation who our unwanted leaders of ours really curious to show. They're not Persians. They're some kind of bugs who infected our country. We are descendants of Cyrus the Great whom had the first Human Rights Manifesto in the world. Please be cautious about difference of my people with the current leaders of my country. Thanks for your nice story. And my apology for my bad English.

khezri7@gmail.com

Maybe you do, but the screaming mob who invaded our embassy in Tehran in 2011, tore up and spat on pictures of my monarch, and set our flag alight didn't look like peace-loving Anglophiles to me; they looked like a rabid, hate-filled mob. Your opinion is yours, and you believe what you like, but I know what I watched on TV, and I remember how we were treated when I went to Tehran in 2007, as part of a humanitarian co-operation requested by your government; the guns shoved in our faces, the looting of all our medical supplies, the theft by your revolutionary guard of all our personal effects, wedding rings, watches, wallets, everything, the body searches, groping, fondling, and threats of rape our nurses and female doctors were subjected to, the assaults, the screaming accusations that we were there to convert 'good' muslims to Christianity. You believe what you like, I'll just go on remembering what I saw and experienced at first hand from the 'peace-loving' allegedly civilised Iranians.

Loved it Loved it Loved it.

Thank you so much for writing this wonderful story

Good to start with brother and sister then it went haywire getting others involved in their lives why can't it just be about them getting together and living happy for the rest of their lives.

Loved this series and was stoked to have Lorna and Gerry's story added. Wish I could give more stars. Cheers.

Loved the final part. All beautifully tied up in a happy ending. Well done!

so far I have enjoyed everything you have written

Love these stories. So well written. However if you want to go to Cambridge you would use the M11 not the M1!