All Comments on 'A Hot Snowy Evening'

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well written ..held my attension....

quite romantic apart from some of the un-necessary dialogue like saying 'right now' three times in two lines - other than that could quite imagine that happening. Well done.

at 42 wendy

all wrong

wendy at 42 years old

you need to read more.

Thank you very much

DKP

Given her personality, it feels wrong for Wendy to say, "i'll be your whore, your slut." One of the few times in Lit stories where her submissive language didn't fit. The rest of the story was very good. Just means that women don't always need to talk slutty to be a turn-on.

***Good read. Thanks for sharing.

Damn, loved the story. Didn't like the slut, whore dialogue, just didn't feel right for the situation, but it's your story. Sexy as hell.

Thank you for sharing