All Comments on 'A Hot Summer Day'

4 different women in one day. What a fantasy to have. If I had half that I'd feel my life was complete. You could get into a bit more detail about each women's "attributes", but you get your point across.

You failed to tell your wife about the next door neighbor getting it on with the husband

For sharing.

TOO STUPID TO BE REAL.

As a fantasy...is good...but what would happen if she had brought home not only her female friends, but also 3 or 4 male friends? 2*

Number one rule in writing, every time a new person speaks another paragraph is formed. If you don't know that much you should learn before attempting to write anymore stories.

for effort and content

I'm glad this story pops up when I read from this section. I enjoy it every time I read it and I give it a 5 each time.

i see you are a male so maybe that is why your writing is so stilted or maybe just young and ummature,, no matter,, its still a good stroke tale and every man's fantasy..

contractions are allowed and make the dialogue more intimate,,as in "don't stop",, instead of "do not stop"

your last story was 2013, so maybe you are no longer around, i will read the rest of the chapters but no further comment from me.

I was about to comment on the identical points of the story. Agree fully about style affecting eroticism.

Almost everyman's fantasy. Except gay anon from 5/1/18. Lighten up,sweetie, It's called fiction for a reason! And then again, maybe not, it happened to me.

Wife just wants to be a whore, nothing else.

A very dreamy story story from the man’s point of view. I wish some people would learn a little class and not criticize others.

I wonder how much fun it will be for him when his wife wants him to reciprocate and let her have an equal number of men?

Yes! Dream on. Now that was a night time story.

Anonymous, fiction? Really?

Dumb er den shit.

wifey went from supposedly straight to at least bisexual just like that? Nah, next will be a bunch of guys and he will be expected to participate and please them.

I'm usually leary of 'Loving Wife' stories as they usually end up being 'cheating wife' stories, this one was refreshingly different! A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Jealousy and divorce on the way