by Chris7sw
5 stars. clever, fun ,sexy story. look forward to more!
I enjoyed chapter 1 & I look forward to future chapters. I hope you bring the other relatives into the next chapters.
I loved this story right from the start, but I couldn’t help but smile at the author’s use of ‘maidenhead’ throughout it - I think he meant maidenhood instead. Maidenhead is actually a town in Berkshire in the UK, lol!
Apart from that humorous anomaly it’s a very easy story to give five stars to. Can’t wait for chapter two!
His mum's sister in law's child would be his cousin, not his niece. Can't believe someone didn't twang on this first, as he is way too young to have impregnated his aunt.
Oh dear, how easy it is to let your computer lead you astray, because sadly there's no way for your average computer to pick up the difference between a town and a hymen or the relative status of a relative.
However, thanks to your comments I've been guided to make amendments which I hope will soon enable you to read on without smirking!
(Adjustments made just now but will take a day or two to filter through)
Dad should have let Chris have her for the first day
Hope there will be more adventures
Maidenhood is virginity, maidenhead is the hymen, Maidenhead is a town in the UK. Easy check of the dictionary.