All Comments on 'A Husband and a Wife Story'

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raraewriterraraewriterover 2 years ago

Fabulous and clever.

LeighKentLeighKentover 2 years ago

Amazing story as always!

sparktjsparktjover 2 years ago

Superb writing. I love stories like this, with older married folks seeking relief from their frustrations in their stale relationships. The illicit sex they crave is invariably so intense, raw and dirty, which you’ve portrayed perfectly. Please continue with these characters, you’ve set them up beautifully.

Lee2012Lee2012over 2 years ago

Very hot and extremely well written. Live the added ending of a voyeur brought back memories of a limo ride gir my GF birthday. Her fantasy if sex in a limo and on a train. 1 diwn, 1 to go. 5*

timbrewulftimbrewulfover 2 years ago

Absolutely stunningly accurate portrayal of a real life situation. You are a good writer and deserve a much wider audience. Much more along these lines please. You have another fan. Thank you for the time and effort you have put into this story. True to life. Ask me how I know.

Crusader235Crusader235over 2 years ago

Whoa, who spoke? Hot story, looking forward to more.

MedicalpeteMedicalpeteover 2 years ago

WOW!!! You have won me! A great story well told.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow! Please continue…great story

LadiesAreFirstLadiesAreFirstover 2 years ago

Great storyline. Last sentence, nice touch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I liked the story, but it left too many open questions.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Something was so familiar about the characters. Really looking forward to finding out who was watching them.

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Reading erotica has always been one of my favorite things. I remember many quiet nights lying naked reading stories like the ones I am writing now. I wanted to thank everyone who has read my stories. Every comment that I get inspires me to write more. I hope everyone enjo...