All Comments on 'A Late Night Call Starts It All'

entertaining plot line, a little redundant with talking during sex, I enjoyed the story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

ghost i loved the story. danger and sex and pregnancy. i hope you write the next chapter soon.

Well written plot...great dialogue...plenty of passion...needs another chapter!

Good story I hope you have a good ending to it

Will you be completing this story?

Oh c'mon! Finish the friggin story.

I'm loving these stories of yours. Not to long but tell a good take and plenty of detail.

This is a great story, but it surely needs to be continued. With a great plot and interesting characters, the story never lags for a moment. The love scenes, while too short, not only enhance the story, but help to advance it. However, this story is really a Romance story, not an Erotic Couplings story. Lines such as these: "Michelle slowly moved towards him and leaned over placing her hands on both sides of his face. "I love you," she said before gently kissing him."

And this "Jason returned the kiss as he held her, "I love you too." help make for a wonderful (and dramatic) Romance story, where love abounds.

Tres Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

Good but seems incomplete.

Needs more that is for Shure but a good story.

Incomplete