All Comments on 'A Lesbian Love Story- of Sorts'

commendable effort. Got me stiff and kept me hard.

Dynamite sex. Really sloppy copy, but at this point, even I don't care. Then ultimate stroke story. Gave it a 5, because it's one of the best.

Very good stuff. The pure amount of sex with different partners did put me off though. Otherwise, grade A story.

Excellent! Romantic and erotic. Kept me with a nice boner!

your writing has cpntinued to improvr hope to see more

More, please. I want to hear the story of their time with Kate the waitress.

Just so exquisitely written, planned, executed. Well done with Julia, the sly, strong-willed, confident, manipulative, and down right hot characterizing of her was inspiring as a fellow writer.

One of the best stories I have read in a long time. Thank you!

This easily the best start I have ever read on this site. It had it all. Seduction, domination, romance, role reversal and crazy erotic sex scenes, all wrapped up in a love story. The fact that you make such an extreme story seem real is amazing. I came twice reading it and expo t to when I read it again.

Thanks for another great story we both loved it.

As a fans of your work we enjoyed the way you worked Characters from previous stories into this one

Well developed plot, exciting, very erotic and I loved how you brought your stories together. However I think you could take a little more time to build in a little more description - it might add a little to the sensuality of the story.

I very much hope you're going to develop their relationship - you've got a lot of 'ingredients' there.

R.

Quite a savory tale! An erotic blend of deep feelings mixed with lust and seasoned with depth of character as well as characters. Bravo!

That said i would not mind a continuation of sorts or another expose involving the vivacious governor and the eager bridal salesgirl as well as the willing waitress.

I loved you how portrayed love in this story with sexual bits and flirtation. I am incredibly wet now as I speak, thank you for writing this. This story was truly amazing.

This story got me soo hard!! Every second I was waiting for more!! I got off so many times to this story

This was a long story, and it kept me riveted throughout the entire story. I will re-read this many times. A masterbatory Masterpiece !!

I really did like this story. It was hot and sexy. My only complaint was the length but I know you can't submit chapters in a contest. Good luck in the contest.

A long story, but justified as none of it was padding. You used that length to lead us through a very well managed step-by-step seduction. Hot, with flashes of humour - my favourite type of story.

5 stars

loved the suduction it had me hard most of the time. it was a bit long but very good in detail. your one very good writer and i love your work and especially how you think. keep up the good writings. at one point in the story i see gwen seemed to be turning from the joy of submission to dominant. love the way she gave the used egg to the waitress. i can imagine there was a great time with her using the waitress at the club and her being turning into a dominant as she gets off on using the waitress at the club. but thats only my imagination that you have worked up in my head. thanks for the hot story. will there be more. maybe a story of how she cant get enough of women. or how she turns the table on her best freind and has her rapped around her finger and stuck up her pussy doing any and every kinky thing thats coming out of her now super kinky head

As you say, a love story of sorts. Less romantic than my usual preference, but undeniably hot as hell; it got me all sorts of wet. It also had moments of great humor and tenderness even between the pure eroticism. I especially liked the ever changing dynamics of their relationship. Great story!

Totally brilliant, the way it was totally thought out. I will have to read and read this fantastic, hot story.

this was one of the best stories i ever read

very good story would love to read if kate joined in or not?

I wouldn't be able to ever describe to you the emotional impact this story has on me. As an Alpha-male type who all his life had been proudly egalitarian until some time ago when, thinking I was doing her a favor, I delivered an almost fatal emotional wound to the love of my life and lost her forever - my dark night of the soul and epiphany - I am a late-comer to the full realization of what we males are doing to our women in everyday life. Only now knowing what equality of the sexes actually means, your narrative of the two lovers, so lightly and humorously told, actually had me, a real tough, no-nonsense jock, in tears. This type of tale is somewhat belatedly teaching me what women are really like and how I should be treating them - and how I should have treated my great love then. When, oh when is this patriarchy ever coming to an end? It traumatizes not only women, but every single male. Thanks for your therapy and education - also the sex! - and please accept this praise as heartfelt and certainly not over the top. Julian, Pretoria.

my god, i never wanted this story to end! so finely written.. the emotions, the sex, the character devt., and the story buildup -- so great.. i love your stories

Loved it, what a read you are simply the greatest story teller. Thanks

Very well written. Only needed a little more explicit sex. Wish you would have written an additional chapter about the day after Valentine's day excursion with Kate and at the lesbian club.

Lesbianism is not my favourite theme, but You are a wonderfull writer

very lovely story and definently a love story. it has been awhile since I read a story that was more than a page long that held my interest throughout; your's did that and more. I look forward to reading more of your stories!

You connected the two stories together wonderfully. And the content was so hot, it left me tingling ALL over. Beautifully done!

i'm usually not into submission but you crafted it into this story greatly. well done.

A simply fabulous story!

I loved the seduction and the interchange of the dom and sub roles. I would love to see how Gwen takes to her new sense of confidence and her new found ability to be dominant. Perhaps a part 2?

Elle_S

One of the best I've read. Literate, articulate, and explicit without bieng lowbrow. Bravo. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Not normally my fare, but couldn't put it down once I began reading. Tremendously literate inasmuch as it held my interest from start to finish!

Told with humour as well as eroticism.

Thanks once more, Jasmine, for a very enjoyable hour's reading.

I'm not usually into domination and submission (at least I don't think I am) but this was such a wonderful love story! It went at exactly the right pace and it was such fun to watch Gwen change as she realized she was a lesbian. Loved your story! ~ L

i don`t read domination stories,but i appreciate this one due to the fact that love and respect exudes on the character of the story.

This is the BEST thing I have EVER read on this site. I came so many times I think I lost track. Please write more about loving lesbian D/s relationships... or seduce me that way. Either or. ;)

This is the greatest story of love and suduction that I have read on this site, and the sex in it is as hot as it gets.

That story was a great turn-on while at the same time romantic (in a sense). I love, love, loved it! But there was only one strange thing to this story.. Julia's description (excluding the red hair and taller height)/personality (at least the one shown to normal people) well fits my teacher.. So I imagined Julia throughtout the story with the voice and looks of her. A little strange, but none-the-less, this story was amazing! Keep up the good work.

Great story !

Amazing story! One of the best.

As a 'practicing lesbian' I simply loved this story! One of the best ever in the genre. It was an amazing ride and one I'd take any day! I only hope that some of it was true!

I love nice ending like this ....Lesbian love story at is best...

This its truly am amazing story. It got me hot and made me explode with sheer pleasure. I usually stop reading once I cum, but this one had me captivated until the end. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Very nice read - good build-up, great characterisation, solid romantic thread - and nasty sex. All the boxes ticked!

Well done again, yet another great read.

Thanks x

A beautiful story of gorgeous lesbian love,and so incredibly well told-thank you so very much!!

And soo inspirational :D

For my joy is ever tripple, when you nibble on my nipple

and no quibble that my kibble is the most delightful tipple

every time I get to lap it from your cunt.

love VvV

I was really hoping she would quit being a player and become devoted to her lover. I hope I never end up in a club like that. To me it kind of ruins the sense of being a lesbian, you'd think a women would treat other women better and not act like animals in heat. It also kind of made me sad you portrayed your characters like this, Not all lesbians are promiscuous and I'm grateful for that. I was actually horrified of how someone can let another use them like that and be okay with being treating and put down the way it did. I understand that there are role of dominance and submission but why do these roles have to consist promiscuity? I honestly felt that club was really bad, and it sickened me...

A wonderful story created by a wonderfully dirty mind.

have read this story so many times - seriously would be fantastic if you did a sequel carrying on the seduction and submission but of other girls into their sex life like in your epilogue. pleassseeeeee!;)

This is quite likely the very best story of its kind that I've ever read! It started hot and grew hotter by the page. You are truly a gifted writer, and one I would like to see publishing stories on Amazon's eStory sites. You are so good that you should be paid for what you write, and Amazon is one way to capitalize on that. Again, a masterful piece of erotic writing and as good a Lesfic piece as I have ever read.

I am not usually a dom/ sub kind of gal. But this ROCKED! why cant love and sex and life be as nice as it is in this story! It felt so GOOD that in the end they are happy and together!

...yet again!

I'm in agreement with some of the other comments in that I don't much care for domination/submission in love and sex. Maybe I'm just old-fashioned but I think that loving partners, no matter what their orientation, should treat each other as equals and with respect. That said, the story as a whole was so nicely plotted and entertaining that I was able to shove my dislikes to one side. In the end I gave you five stars---the tale was worth it.

See how much sweeter love is over force.

I must really live a sheltered life... Someone told me there is actually a sex club right here in my area. I had no idea, and now when I see people, I wonder... Do you go? Or you? What's your kink?

I'm an elementary school teacher and feel very dichotomized by my life on the outside and my sexual appetite on the inside. Creates a fabulous tension...

I'm a 60+ lady that had lost interest in sex until I started reading your stories. I've awakened a new me. I actually went to sex store in the city so I wouldn't see anybody I knew. I bought me 4 different cocks, I got one that is larger then any

man I've every seen. I now use one in my pussy and one in my butt. I love the large dildo I use on my cunt - about 9" long and about the size of a coke can around. The one for the butt is smaller but just as long. I even tried your shopping - I went to buy some shoes without any panties and a very short skirt. Even though I'm 60+ I keep myself in shape and big tits (D-cup) are now so sensitive. I found a store with a women about 45+ and asked her to help me find my shoes - I sat on the edge of the seat and pulled up my skirt and gave a good look at my "now"shaved pussy. She turned several shades of red but kept looking. I finally asked her if she liked what she saw and she smiled and said yes, I've never seen anyone like you before. I asked if she wanted to see more and she said yes - get off in 30 minutes. I will call my husband and tell him I'm going shopping for a couple hours he will not mind. More later. But she tasked great.

I am so deep into my feelings right now. You are a fabulous writer. I love reading all your work swetie and i always will. I long for the moments i have that allow me to read your work. Its stories like this one that gives me hope in finding love. But i will say this i am in love with your stories not just this one sweetie.

I have to agree with love at last, this story and all your other got the juices flowing

I also in my 60s and for years my husband never wanted sex. He was an ass.

I feel so much different reading this particular story. I'm also not a bad looking older gal. I went a lesbian bar and most if not all were way younger than l but I felt comfortable. I did !meet a charming lady at my mammogram lab. She's also married but her husband is never home. Next weekend were going to have a ladies weekend out. I want to get her in bed also love at last mentioned above. Kiss and hiugs to everyone.

why didn't I come across your stories sooner? Your fault or mine? Obviously yours, because you had the stories, not me. Well, not to worry. All is forgiven because I have your lovely collection now, and hours ahead of me to read them all. Seriously, thanks for the enormous library of delicious sexy humor. Can't wait!

Your story is so wonderful. It is exiting, yes, but it is also very moving. You have started an emotional storm in me. The moment when the declared their love for each other got me in tears.

Your story telling is second to none love it

This is not a Love story...of sorts. This is an honest to God, suck face, diamond ring, wedding bells, birthday and Christmas Card, gone out on a date but come back home and call and talk for another hour ...... True Love. This is the kind of Love story that should have a new word invented for. Maybe, "Foreverness". I wonder if Gwen might write a chapter about their love when they get to their 50th anniversary. Picture it. The Escalator at the mall. Two old women, must be about 80yrs old both of them, rising up the moving stairs. One wearing clamdiggers and petit deck shoes with a conservative print blouse and her grey hair touching her shoulders. The other wearing a sun dress much shorter than a woman her age should but she wears it well with the roman sandals and the long flowing, absolutely white hair. They ascend slowly with their arms around each other's waist, one's head leans over on the other's shoulder. Two old lesbians, both exhausted after just an hour's shopping, still incredibly in Love. Silkstockingslover, you feed my imagination!

You have got to read and digest this piece of work stunning is all I can say

wonderful as ever, it drug along just a bit in spots, but I always love your writings.

Loved this story, cries out for part 2, Gwen's return to the club and Kate's introduction to eating out the pair of lovers. Its a shame that I know of no simular club in my part of the UK.

Needs a sequel! Expand any in epilogue!!!!

Silkstockinglover, you are a mistress of the written orgasm! I have read several of your stories and love them all, as does my happy penis. Would that l could wrote as well as you l would write about my own bisex interludes from age 15 eith a friend who has the most magnificent and tasty cock. I live a hetro life but Have continued to meet up with him (he is totally gay) in secret......oh what a story you could write about us ....Stay fantastic Mistress S.S.L.

This is one of the very best stories of any kind that I've ever read! Published elsewhere, it could have earned the author a small fortune. Published here, the author has presented the reader with a present for all time. Not just good--GREAT! If I wrote for the next 50 years, I would only approach, not meet or exceed, the talent herein displayed. Do it all again...please.....

I assume your readers are mature. If they like shaved porn stars, then fine. But my taste is a natural woman. Natural women are very sensual, and can be very erotic. I don't want to read about shaved pussies, or porn stars.

Of course 5" isn't good enough for you. Not like you could ever like or respect a man that size. Sorry for existing ladies.

Made me cum so fucking hard. Keep up the good work! XoXo

You still have it. Still my favorite female author here.

You know, really, rating this 5 star just doesn't seem to do it... I have read and rated a lot of 5 star Jasmine stories... but this is a 9 or a 10 or something... just not a 5...

Just the best... love, sex, submission from the soul, real emotion, real intimacy

I really liked the lead in. In the Epilogue I had my only disappointment when they talked about still adding trophies to their collection. Perhaps I have this world all wrong, but I kind of expected to see them focusing on each other, with no need for others.

I've read and reread this story. I 1st read after starting your babysitting series and learning about the connection to this story. It was more than entertaining, observe the cohesiveness in gelling the 2 separate party's. This accomplishment alone sets you apart from other storytellers. KUDOS SILKSTOCKINGSLOVER

5🌟's and a dozen roses 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

This is a sweet story that happens to be obscene. The huge cast of characters was a bit much to digest but everyone was so happy in their lust it created a community of joyful perversion. It's sad that Gwen's fiance was a jerk but she found much better sex and more importantly LOVE. Had to vote a 5. Thank you.

I like your stories but there are errors in the writing that need some judicious editing. e.g knowing the difference between 'too' and 'to'. Also, reference to Gwen when it was not her speaking. I've seen comments elsewhere in your stories of these problems. I can see that some may be put off/distracted from the high level eroticism by them, so maybe that is what you need your editors to find for you?

... if some people were honestly into the well developed characters and the flawless scripted plot that grammatical errors would not be noticed. I surely don't see how they can take anything away from a delightful, sensual story such as this love story if it is being read as it should be and not for some armchair literary critic to bash at ... Another one well written and very much enjoyed! Thank you ;)

This is a true love story because it's about ...." hearts not parts "

Jasmine,

Thank you for this. I wanted to be Gwen, frankly. The way you developed their characters and the plot were sweet, wonderful. I wish there were a le Chateau near my home. I suspect it wouldn't be quite as wild as you paint yours, but the ideal classy lesbian club is a goal not to be dropped lightly. It probably takes a much larger city than that in which I live to make it real, also more money than I can possibly afford. I just need to find a wonderful rich dyke to bankroll it.

Thanks again for a gem of a story!

This is a great love story it had me from the start

Keep up the great work I enjoy all of your stories

Oxo Ozeminotaur

You have awakened a desire I have never felt. The anal scene at the end had me so hard. Would love for you to take my anal cherry

Another Masterpiece!!!!

As usual, wonderful characters and lovely story. I enjoy all your stories and have even enjoyed some of those in areas I would not typically read. I also love that you intertwine some of your different stories and series. Thank you so very much for your continuing creativity!

Willow

Love all your story I have not read them all yet but, I will soon. When I was 25 my husband and I had been married for almost 6 years I was only 19 when we got married. We were at a beach and a woman came on to me at a shop were I was trying on bathing suits she keep feeling me up when helping me putting one on or off. I was getting turn on my nipples stay hard. I wanted her to fuck me so bad but, she get so many people in the shop she told me she was off the next day and would like to meet us at the beach were we was staying and would bring some drinks and would love to see me. I told my husband about her and he said for me to do whatever I wanted to do with her. More to come on this story if you would like to read if.

Keep your story coming Love

Its a great story. I hesitate to say its a cookie cutter story, but the whole story was predictable, and did not disappoint.

It puzzles me why in so many lesbian stories, lesbians are so often portrayed as immoral predatory nymphomaniacs.

Why can't they just be ordinary folks with the only point of difference being that the ladies like ladies. And the social and family problems that comes from being different.

Why can't they just have the ordinary drama that ordinary folk have.

Why do they need to be sitting in a restaurant having a date night with the love of their lives, whilst simultaneously being eaten out by all and sundry. Hardly the foundation for a committed loving relationship.

Why do so many of them need to be in the lesbian D/S world?

Thought this was gonna be Mushy to begin with. But no, it's a typical Silkstockings, only epic. I would love read about their adventures together in seduction. As I'm pretty sure most of your fans would as well.

An epic love story! I loved it!

As a guy, I am always envious of the women in your stories that are able to get off in multiple ways and with so many different toys. Oh to be a female for a day or a week! In this story of course the main focus was sweet and tender, but the side events added the heat that made this a really good read. If you plan a sequel, they offer many directions to explore. Good job!

Awesome.

There is no doubt you are my favorite author on Literotica. There are so many of your stories that I could say are my favorite but this one is now at the top of the list in it's singularity. The way the love unfolded, hell even I fell in love with them both. I did anticipate a surprise ending and for a second I thought you were going to give it to me. I thought Gwen would wind up as the Domme but I do love the way you brought them together. Wish I could give this one 10 stars.

WOW, what a brilliantly amazing story, it certainly deserves the 5 stars (wish there were more). Thank You

You are a mesmerizing writer! I enjoyed this one as much as your others ... and then some.

WOW !! No other words come to mind

I loved your love story. I love your stories of submissions. This is one of your best and definitely one of the best on literitica. Thank you.

This was an excellent read 5ssss

again an excellent storey. nice link to another storey. are there any other related or linked stories?