All Comments on 'A Lesson from the Boss Ch. 01'

Can't wait for the next, double-penetrating chapter!

While it had plenty of action there wasn't much of a setup for the action in the story. You don't know what's happening, I can't do better i admit but give some back ground lay the ground work first.

I needed something with a good story, that delivered quickly, so I actually liked the fact that you got straight to the point. There was still enough detail to begin with, enough to get me into the story. I’m excited to get to the second chapter. Thank you!