All Comments on 'A Lesson in More Things Than Music'

PUT IT IN HETERO, SO SICK OFF SO CALLED LESBIAN STORIES WITH GUYS INVOLVED

Some guys are seriously fucked up!

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:( disappointing ending But thank you for trying.

A lesbian is fundamentally different from a bisexual. I appreciate the effort & there's obviously a story you felt was important enough to tell, but this one meandered all over the sexual orientation map. Gay, bi, straight, lesbian. Didn't really settle down & tell a coherent believable story. Keep working on your skills, though. Writing is a learning process & you'll get better with practice & study. Nice effort.

Very hot, though I would have ended with a teacher discovering the girls rather than the same boy and the "more the merrier" twist.

If you have it in you, a punishment scene where the teacher locks the door, draws the shades, then walks to the desk and pulls out a paddle would have been very nice.

This was nice, I think you should go farther with this