All Comments on 'A Life Not My Own Ch. 01'

really Impressed, action, sex and a story that is well paced and very compelling.

DAMSEL Approved

This is quite a story. While it does start out slow, it really picks up and keeps you interested. Can't wait for the next installment.

So far, I love this. Great action and characters. The dialog is fun. There were a couple typos but I don't worry about the much.

I do think I see where this is heading though and am hoping that either I am wrong or that it wasn't that obvious.

But I do want to see more. If only to find out what has the stick up Echo's ass.

So I am looking forward to the next chapter of yet another of your stories.

and an enjoyable story - more chapters please ??? (I gave this a five.)

Well developed and nicely paced. I look forward to the next instalment.

As usual you've successfully captured my interest in this storyline. I look forward to the next chapters.

Another good job mixing the sex with a compelling plot. I'd love to see more, as long as it doesn't delay the next chapter of Christian College Sex Comedy!

I liked it and will gladly read the next instalment - but as the previous anon commenter stated please don't forget about CCSC - thanks

I've made only about 3 comments of the many hundreds of stories I've read on litE, this story rocked! Easily top 3. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

loved the interplay between Echo and Dominic

FS, another great story, very enjoyable.

Butt I was thinking, that final line, it is true that a cougar would not be afraid of dates but if pussycat gets too greedy eating them, those dates'll have her shitting a brick.

I'msure a vulgar joke is hiding in there somewhere!

Stories told in present tense are the worst and will always get a 1-star rating from me.

But I loved it

Kept me off balance, never quite sure what was coming next.

A very compelling story and I can't wait to see what comes next!

Jason

great!

So far so good more please.

NorthPacific

Outstanding amounts of fun in this story - and smiles on my face after reading it.

Thank You for sharing ... all the best !

I love the character of Dominic.

... thank you. Dominic was/is fun to write. I like a really smart guy who isn't a total combat bad-ass ... as the reader shall see in later chapters. It is exploring both his strengths and weaknesses which creates (I hope) a fascinating character.

Take care,

James aka FinalStand

Lots of Fun!

Glad you’re back! I couldn’t believe my eyes when, after four barren years, a new LNH appears. I had to rush out and buy a lottery ticket. I don’t know why I never realized you had other series, too. Thank you.

Good start, but unfinished.