All Comments on 'A Little Lunchtime Relief'

by Deadly Joker

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widespreadinterestswidespreadinterestsalmost 20 years ago
Good job

Very hot and fun story. Not sure I understand these guys, but the sex part was very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Ummmm....

Sort of odd, but fun.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Hubba

What's not to understand... they're horny as hell and willig to nail anything. Wonderful story, even for a straight guy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Hot story!

A fun story with hot sex. Those two horny teens know how to make lunch more fun!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
SlutTreatment

You're so nasty with your writing. *purr* -J

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wonderful imagination!!

Hopefully the next time, Joey is dressed fully!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wow!!!!!!!

wow.thats all i could say when i read this.i was speechless.i mean that was the kinkiest most intresting thing i ever read(next to your other story for gay male).and i'm a girl so thank you vey very much.i can sleep better tonight okay?see ya.

Dar~Dar~about 19 years ago
Dang!

Great story, Just picked it at random, glad I did. Very hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
yowza

Well done... Nick's changover seemed a bit quick, but the sex was spectacular.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
i like the story

i relly liked your stoy it got me relly hard

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow...

Loved the way those boys talked to each other. Great relationship, GREAT dialogue, and a very hot story, overall.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow

One word says it all: great! Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
CUMM ALL OVER!

MY cock was so hard i had to take the laptop to the bathroom and jerk off myself! Rocks! Over and over again!

seksieseksiealmost 18 years ago
me-ow!

SO hott. That story was very sexy and kinky. I loved it. Your writing style is dynamic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Oh yes, Nick is oh so straight. (My partner said the same thing for years. We were childhood friends too. We've been together 11 years now.)

xXAustinXxxXAustinXxover 12 years ago
Chapter 2?

You should make this into chapters. I'd really like to see how things turn out when they go off to college and they meet other people and how Nick would feel if Joey brought another guy home to fuck him in the ass that belongs to Nick. This would be a very good storyline of how Nick comes to realize that he is jealous and in love with Joey. Well yea just my suggestion but this is a very good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great

like stories like this- big, strong, handsome jock has a cock-slave_to worship his cock- anytime, anywhere----would do anything to get a taste of that jock cock__after football or soccer practice joey could suck sweaty balls and lick sweaty ass clean.....worship big biceps and pecs and pits--work down those washboard abs--then beg the jock for the chance to worship his cock- ---i would have enjoyed it more if the jock weren't so obviously a cock hungry bitch himself- and definitely wouldn't want the muscle jock to wear panties----i want a man to be dominant and masculine and not a cock-sucking, panty-wearing bitch. i'm all for the cave man that feeds you his cum then leaves you to finish yourself off while he goes to chat up his girl....cock slaves/sluts need to be that---sluts and slaves- not equal sex partners

okbottomboi69okbottomboi69about 10 years ago

Great story. Would love to dress up for a guy and have him use my like a woman

ImpishKittyKatImpishKittyKatover 8 years ago
LOVE IT!!!!!!!

I love this story! Please continue it.

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