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by al_Ussa

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Could We Have It Again - In English?

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There's a story in there - but the spelling and grammar is extremely off-putting. Not to mention such gems as the woman being <i>"casual and business-like"!</i>

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Maybe try working with one of Lit's volunteer editors before submitting again...?

toJohnny7toJohnny7over 14 years ago
Nice wholesome story

thanks for writing. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More!!!!!!!!!!!

Please continue this story.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Continuation.

You should continue the story,tell us what happens with Jan.

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