All Comments on 'A Little Taste of Blackmail Ch. 02'

Who scored this so high? The first chapter is not very believable and poorly written so I didn't read the rest. Why would this woman film and photograph herself for taking a parking space? I don't think so.

The premise of this story is fear of something small ( a civil lawsuit) overcoming a desire to do the is requested of them. The more they do, the more they want to do. I think that plays out with the end of each encounter. It was a minor infraction that would have been very inconvenient to deal with, so they gave in. They kept giving in because they liked the game and the liberty they felt it would give them. Sorry you didn't like it.

... A parking infraction that led directly to the death of an elderly man. And then the fear of getting involved after running away from that result.

The author needs some serious proof reading. Numerous spelling errors and the occasional confusion (for me, anyway) in who's narrating the story.

It was unlikely , no onecould have held Celeste liable. I enjoyed the sex scenes though. Very hot.

Oh what a tangled web we weave and beware you don't get caught in your own web! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.