All Comments on 'A Loaded Question'

Well done. The dialog set the stage for some great imagery and I found it easy to suspend the disbelief.

One of my favorite stories of the year so far.

Oh so good!

It's almost unbelievable how fast, and yet credible, the build-up was.

Cheers and hope to read you soon.

Was so good. Everything that happened with the setting of the play rehearsal worked. Made me actually feel like I was there. Amazing!

This might've been a good story but you make the dialogue so hard to read. Ellipses everywhere barely any dialogue tags and long drawn out paragraphs of talking.

This an incredibly well written story. It's hot, it's kinky and it's even sweet. It's just a shame the author is inactive.

This is incredibly sexy. Every step of the build amped up the sexual energy. Thanks for writing and sharing this.