All Comments on 'A Long Weekend with Mom Ch. 03'

After an unfortunate start, this author's talent is beginning to shine out like a beacon on a moonless night.

This chapter is so hot, the reader might ignite from spontaneous combustion.

Very well done! 5/5.

A great love story along with being a sexy and kinky mom son sexual encounter.

I wonder if Holly will get pregnant?

Thanks for the good read

...the real start of what can be a great story. Excellent written, don't stop here, keep going!

I have enjoyed all 3 parts of this series, always 5 stars in my opinion, Hope you keep it going. Thank You!!!!!!!

xlnt. your talent about mom son story writing is now begin shining, now you are a top class mom son author. no doubt, the incest(mother son) fan got a new man who can fulfill their fantasy. you write everything need in this mother son incest story including anal what is the most erotic. but if you include some pervertness like mom farted loudly when the son performing anal, it would be more erotic. hope next time you fullfil. in next part you should write some female domination which you told the story end, it would be the new erotic subject of this story. mom should perform some sexual torture on her son under her complete submission control. waiting for your next and dont forget about anal pervertness to write.

It was definately one fun and hot story to read. A little 'brainless', but a good read. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. ^__^

can you wright sume more of this series thay are hot. Tell use about Melissa what happenes nowe do you and mom get together for the long haul ? yours leann xxxxxx

Great work. To bad you stopped writing 2 and a half years ago. Left us hanging a tad.

Great story man, absolutely loved Hollys personality. Looking forward to your next story!

Thought this was a great series - too bad you haven't written anymore stories

i can tell there's more to this story and i like it to contuniue because it left me wanting more ty

is there going to be anymore of this story?

if there is what would you have planned for them?

You know it's a good story when you don't want it to ends. I wish you had other submissions. FIVE STARS ALL THE WAY!

Protagonist realizes "She doesn't want me to be gentle this time." continues to have super Vanilla Sex kissing and licking her for 15 minutes...

One of the most logically developed love stories I have read in a while. Although fiction, how many find someone that they trust enough to tell their fantasies to? It is truly ashame that real life does not mirrow fiction. at times. This truly a 5 star series. I wish the author would come back to this story and write 5 or 6 more chapters.

Agreed.