All Comments on 'A Look Up Her Dress'

After I gave you a 5, I went and looked up your bio and your other stories. I just can't believe this story was rated below 4.50. Obviously a few peanuts must have marked you a 1 perhaps out of spite or frustrated they couldn't write as well as you can.

I think they should make it that anyone posting a score has to provide their Literotica name as well.

i have to say this is by far the best mother/daughter story i have read. i hope you continue with it. much love and respect

A great sexy story. Well written

I think this story was incredibly sexy and very well thought out and written. The only part I didn't get was why was the father was never mentioned In any kind of a positive light. I thought he should have at least been the one taking pictures. I gave it 4 stars and I do intend to read more of your writing. Thanks for a very good read.

This did it for me. Perfectly. Thank you. :)

So hot. Chapter 2?

Great story, one of your best. Nice tempo leading up to the actual sex. Hopefully you will let us know what happens when Lindsey turns 18.

didn't read everything from overall story .. when able absolutely happening ..

i've did literally read bits&pieces here+there bits+pieces here&there -

absolutely fantastic absolutely masterpiece .. if Lindsey as crazy really seems

than she isn't gonna ever wait Kat literally sexing her .. she also won't ever

wait her sister Katie sexing her just like she also won't ever wait their

mother Marge sexing her .. this leaves couple options along more than couple

different scenarios - Lindsey could work as personal trainer/dance instructor

around gym even though she's still really young : Katie's father along hers

becomes fully introduced story does attend this leads Lindsey along their father

sexing roughly \ Lindsey could work as personal trainer/dance instructor

around gym even though she's still really young : her sister's friend Sue that did

hit on their mother does attend this leads Lindsey along Sue sexing real rough

\ Lindsey could work as personal trainer/dance instructor around gym

even though she's still really young : Katie's teacher/her teacher Judy that

also did hit on their mother does attend this leads Lindsey along Judy sexing

real roughly .. i've did now give more than couple options along i've also did

give lots different scenarios

Please write a part 2 for this story

I don't usually read lesbian stories but because I've read some of your other stories and liked them, I thought I'd give it a shot. I'm very glad I did, it's a five. Just wish there were more panties in the story because that's my fetish lol. Anyway, I greatly enjoyed reading about mother/daughter incest and love.

it's now been month this story . haven't continued ...... if it continues like

this gonna need read everything again

One were the mom and her best friend both does the daughter with strap-on dildos at the same time. One in the pussy and other in the ass.

STILL HAVEN'T LITERALLY CONTINUED ???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

The way you structured this story there are multiple avenues to develop additional chapters. Excellent foundation. Stephen King should give you a key to his office.

We NEED a sequel to this story! So much more potential with these sexy, well developed characters.

Thank you very much for your kind comments. I've been very busy with work, kids, dogs, and life in general. I'm giving a sequel lots of thought. There are places these gals can go and come... I love all of you!

Loved the story just a few to many I love you mommies but your description of both ladies was really good and exciting , the daughter with her dress so tight I can imagine her tight little arse defined by a crease and her mound at the front gently pushing out and her nipples all perky with mum in black with stockings the noise as she glides along thighs gently stroking each other and her girdle just feint lines showing like a vpl I have this image in my mind and two women I know in particular that it suits in real life Thank You

I love the passion and erotic tension, Need this story to continue and expand to all the possible hookups that the story leads into.

Excellent, this would make a fantastic series.

I'm assuming there will be no part 2 as this wrote over 2 years ago

Well detailed and an excellent read.

Second time reading this, and it is still the same tasteful mix of sweet, sensitive, and passionately erotic. Would love to hear about how 'aunt' Kitty took Katie's lesbian cherry. Also a tryst between Kitty and Katie and her mother would be delicious. So many possibilities; so little time. Thank you for a great and lustful-loving story.

Sorry, but I can't go with that. If this were a story with two random women, I would say it would be highly erotic. But mother and daughter, with mother being an adulteress and having a sexual relationship with another woman well beyond her marriage, I can only shake my head. Or do you have to ignore ethics and morals when reading this story? If the husband finds out that she is having sex with the daughter and that she is having a long sex relationship with another woman, then she will go to prison for a long time because the husband will report her! So much for the inspiring story! She is a characterless woman and the best "good" example for her daughters!