All Comments on 'A Love that Lasts Forever Ch. 07'

Gah, this chapter hurts. Wonderfully written, but painful. The whole recurring bit about running really resonated with me. Caleb ran and Rhys didn’t, and Rhys ended up dead, but maybe if Rhys had run too or if Caleb had run sooner he wouldn’t be, but they’ll never know because it’s too late. It hurts man! Poor everyone.

On a more positive note, even though he was only mentioned in passing a small handful of times, I love Rhylan so so much. He’s baby!!!

Can’t wait to read more <3

I was secretly hoping Caleb was magical omega and this would have turned out differently. The funeral scene was deeply beautiful.

I don't know if I'm sensitive but I have cried too much reading the chapter, it has been too sad for Caleb and Quin despite the death of Ryhs I think they both deserve happiness at the end

Just read Ch. 8 of A Love Lasts Forever. This was the most emotionally charged writing I have encountered. You captured the deepest, complete and most painful feelings of grief of all the major characters so vividly the reader could not rationalize or depreciate them or avoid identifying with them. The sincere and mature love was so present. This work is so in keeping with the high quality of everything I have read of yours with no credjbity being cast in doubt by the alternative society in which it is set. By the way, I am anxiously waiting the next chapter of Shadows of Desire so we can find out what happens to Rowen et al. Always worth waiting for.

Thank you for the kind words. I am glad that you like my writing. I aim to please :)