All Comments on 'A Loving Arrangement Ch. 01'

I don't know how this arrangement cannot change relationships in the house, but wow. Well written, plausible and erotic. Just one grammar thing that I see elsewhere too, it's a "shuddering" orgasm, not a "shuttering" orgasm. I have a feeling the brother doesn't have to worry about finding housing elsewhere anymore.

Thank you for the kind words. And shit, you are correct on the grammar error. Didn’t send this one to my new friend and editor. Hope it didn’t take away from the story. Chapter 2 was uploaded today, so hopefully published by the first of next week.

Next chapter please

This was a great read! Excellent storytelling and left us wanting more. I read an awful lot in Literotica and this was one of the top 5% for me. Thanks for your efforts! :)

Off the chain, hot!

omg.......naughty and very messy which ticks all the right boxes for me.this is hot as hell. i'm looking forward to reading more of your stories

Oh that brought back so many good memories of my first wife. Before she died we shared many of these extraordinary moments. Keep writing them.

simply perfect. A fine bit of erotica.

what they all said!!

Great story. Except there was no incest. This one should have been placed under loving wives . . . .